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A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area v.3

A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area v. 3
Dear Rishi, How have you been? It’s been so long! I just want to provide you a few details while you stay at my place since I will be away on a vacation. I’m living in A2 block, flat 201 on the Sinclair street, which is the most prominent area in the city due to its marvellous views. You won’t have any trouble finding my block as it is at the entrance of the street. There’s a huge palm tree just beside the building which can be identified from a distance. I don’t want to burden you with household chores, but I would really appreciate if you take care of few things like feeding my dog, Tony. He needs to be fed twice a day and although he’s very active and healthy, he might get sick during this cold weather so, contact the vet on the number, which is on the fridge. In addition to that, can you water my plants in the garden? Just once in a day is more than enough. You can visit the Central Park that is just down the street where you’ll be able to enjoy a peaceful walk in the morning. There’s a theatre that is ten minutes away if you’re interested in watching a movie. You can go to the clinic on the next street in case you have any medical emergency. Thanks again for accepting my request to look after my house. I promise to make it up to you! Love, Vijaya
Dear
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Rishi
,

How have you been? It’s been
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so
long! I
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just
want to provide you a few
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details
while you stay at my place since I will be away on a vacation.

I’m living in A2 block, flat 201 on the Sinclair
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street
, which is the most prominent area in the city due to its
Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.
marvellous
views. You won’t have any trouble finding my block as it is at the entrance of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
street
. There’s a huge palm tree
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just
beside the building which can
be identified
from a distance.

I don’t want to burden you with household chores,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would
really
appreciate if you take care of few things like feeding my dog, Tony. He needs to
be fed
twice a day and although he’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
active and healthy, he might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
sick during this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
weather
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, contact the vet on the number, which is on the fridge.
In addition
to that, can you water my plants in the garden?
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Just
once in a day is more than
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enough
.

You can visit the Central Park
that is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
down the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
street
where you’ll be able to enjoy a peaceful walk in the morning. There’s a
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
that is
ten minutes away if you’re interested in watching a movie. You can go to the clinic on the
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
street
in case you have any medical emergency.

Thanks again for accepting my request to look after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I promise to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up to you!

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

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Vijaya
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area v. 3

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
249 words
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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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