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A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area v.1

A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area v. 1
Dear Rishi, I can’t believe that we didn’t see each other since your brother’s birthday party two years ago! Anyway, it was great catching up last week! I’m undoubtedly grateful to you for agreeing to look after my house while I’m away. As you know, I have recently moved to one of the happening street in the city, which is the Sinclair street. My apartment is in A1 block and you could spot it without much effort as it is just at the entrance of the lane, and also there’s a huge palm tree which can be seen from a distance. I don’t want to burden you with my household chores, but I would be really grateful to you if you can walk my pet, Tony twice every day. He’s extremely friendly, although he seems scary at times. Other than that, do you think you could manage watering my plants in the garden? Just once a day would be fine. Since there’s a maid in the house, you don’t have to worry about cleaning. There are plenty of things to keep entertained in the area. Trust me, you won’t be bored. There’s a food festival in the next road if you’re interested to check out various cuisines. You could also go to the movies, the tickets are not that expensive. Do visit the new cafe, which has opened just beside the block if you want to grab some coffee. Have a safe travel and don’t hesitate to buzz me if you need anything. Love, Vijaya
Dear
Rishi
,

I can’t believe that we didn’t
see
each other since your brother’s birthday party two years ago! Anyway, it was great catching up last week! I’m
undoubtedly
grateful to you for agreeing to look after my
house
while I’m away.

As you know, I have recently
moved
to one of the happening street in the city, which is the Sinclair street. My apartment is in A1 block and you could spot it without much effort as it is
just
at the entrance of the lane, and
also
there’s a huge palm tree which can be
seen
from a distance.

I don’t want to burden you with my household chores,
but
I would be
really
grateful to you if you can walk my pet, Tony twice every day. He’s
extremely
friendly, although he seems scary at times. Other than that, do you
think
you could manage watering my plants in the garden?
Just
once a day would be fine. Since there’s a maid in the
house
, you don’t
have to
worry about cleaning.

There are
plenty
of things to
keep
entertained in the area. Trust me, you won’t
be bored
. There’s a food festival in the
next
road if you’re interested to
check
out various cuisines. You could
also
go to the movies, the tickets are not that expensive. Do visit the new
cafe
, which has opened
just
beside the block if you want to grab
some
coffee.

Have a safe travel and don’t hesitate to buzz me if you need anything.

Love
,

Vijaya
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area v. 1

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
254 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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