Nowadays, an increasing number people are concerned about that pupils must be learn about their country history than other countries which is more important. I completely disagree with this opinion, the simple reason that I believe that schools should teach local, nation and world history.
On the one hand, it is significant that children should be learn about their nation history when they go to school. There are several reasons that they should be learn about their country. Firstly, knowing about makes children aware of the events of their country’s past. For example, when Vietnamese student learn about their nation country, it will be providing knowledge about the way of life and liberty which Ho Chi Minh president bring to their nation. They know how do their president find the way to help their country escape their enemy. Secondly, schoolchildren will learn how important local cultural traditions have developed. As a result, they will gain a deeper understanding of each traditional event, and be motivated to carry on the best custom for generations to come.
On the other hand, there are several valuable in world history. Students might be study about historical of other countries over the world, the reason that it will develop an understanding of past experiences of other people. For example, learn about The Second World War can help them to know about the war killed over 61 million people over the world. Moreover, learning about wars in the past will help children become respect what do they have at the moment. It is haven by their forbear and there are various people died to have this liberty.
In conclusion, I think that schools must be teach their student about not only local history but also nation and world history.
Nowadays, an increasing number
people
are concerned
about that pupils
must
be
learn
about their
country
history
than
other
countries
which is more
important
. I completely disagree with this opinion, the simple reason that I believe that schools should teach local,
nation
and
world
history.
On the one hand, it is significant that children should be
learn
about their
nation
history
when they go to school. There are several reasons that they should be
learn
about their
country
.
Firstly
, knowing about
makes
children aware of the
events
of their
country’s
past.
For example
, when Vietnamese student
learn
about their
nation
country
, it will be providing knowledge about the way of life and liberty which Ho Chi Minh president bring to their
nation
. They know how do their president find the way to
help
their
country
escape their enemy.
Secondly
, schoolchildren will
learn
how
important
local cultural traditions have developed.
As a result
, they will gain a deeper understanding of each traditional
event
, and
be motivated
to carry on the best custom for generations to
come
.
On the
other
hand, there are several
valuable
in
world
history
. Students might be study about historical of
other
countries
over the
world
, the reason that it will develop an understanding of
past experiences
of
other
people
.
For example
,
learn
about The Second
World
War can
help
them to know about the war killed over 61 million
people
over the
world
.
Moreover
, learning about wars in the past will
help
children become respect what do they have at the moment. It is
haven
by their forbear and there are various
people
died
to have this liberty.
In conclusion
, I
think
that schools
must
be
teach
their student about not
only
local
history
but
also
nation
and
world
history
.
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37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes