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Do you agree or disagree? To improve quality of education university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. v.106

To improve quality of education university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. v. 106
Throughout history, the university has played a prominent role in all societies. Dou to it is paramount importance university in the modern era professors are of great importance. A controversial question which is often raised this idea improve the salary professors. Some people may hold the view that increases the wage of the professors is essential for promoting quality of instruction. However, some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that enhances the salary teachers not bring about have the high quality of education. I personally content that promote the wage of professor is the right effect on the quality of education. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons. The first exquisite to be mentioned that increases wage of professors provokes teachers to better works. To elaborate on my point, since teachers have a beneficial wage, they endeavor to grow the quality of the university. Also, they effort to grow up the active students; hence, the students who have creative and happiness teachers can excellent focus on the study. I believe that the high rank of universities not only have high salary for the professors but also have elevated quality of learning. A significant example that strikes my mind is about the Sharif University. The Sharif University is one of the high rank of the university in Iran. Owing to have the high quality of learning, students must pay to evaluate tuition for education so that most of this fee spend for the salary of professors. In addition, I believe that professors must have a high rank of wage. Inasmuch as young people are studying in the university, they can make future of country; therefore, professors must spend many times to proper this person who study at the university for promoting future of the country. Hence, when the wage is increased, the professors oblige promote grade teaching in the university. Furthermore, I believe that most university for absorbing the high rank of teachers, they need pay a lot of money for this teachers, therefore, it can help to promote the quality of the education. To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that each university must improve the wage of professors. The increase in the salary not only trigger for teachers to studying in a famous university, but also promote the equality of education.
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in the modern era
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professors
are of great importance. A controversial question which is
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.
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people
may hold the view that increases the wage of the
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is essential for promoting
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quality
of instruction.
However
,
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some
other may take an opposite viewpoint and
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that enhances the
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salary
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teachers
not bring about have the
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high
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quality
of
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education
. I
personally
content that
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the wage of
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professor
is the right effect on the
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of
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education
. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.

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first
exquisite to
be mentioned
that increases wage of
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provokes
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teachers
to better works. To elaborate on my point, since
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teachers
have a beneficial wage, they endeavor to grow the
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quality
of the
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university
.
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they effort
to grow up the active students;
hence
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teachers
can excellent focus on the study. I
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believe
that the
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high
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rank
of
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universities
not
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only
have
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high
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for the
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professors
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also
have elevated
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quality
of learning. A significant example that strikes my mind is about the Sharif
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University
. The Sharif
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University
is one of the
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high
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rank
of the
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university
in Iran. Owing to have the
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high
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quality
of learning, students
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must
pay to evaluate tuition for
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education
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so
that most of this fee spend for the
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salary
of professors.

In addition
, I
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that
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have a
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of wage. Inasmuch as young
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people
are studying in the
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, they can
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make
future of country;
therefore
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professors
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spend
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times to proper this person who study at the
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for promoting future of the country.
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is increased
, the
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professors
oblige
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promote
grade teaching in the
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university
.
Furthermore
, I
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believe
that most
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university
for absorbing the
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high
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rank
of
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teachers
, they need pay
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this
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help
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promote
the
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quality
of the education.

To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that each
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university
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must
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improve
the wage of
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professors
. The increase in the
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salary
not
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only
trigger for
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to studying in a
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,
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also
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the equality of
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15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
65Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay To improve quality of education university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. v. 106

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
395 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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