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62. When you choose to eat at the restaurant or café, what are the features thatyou care about most? Explain why. v.1

62. When you choose to eat at the restaurant or café, what are the features thatyou care about most? Explain why. v. 1
In the salad day of the millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally. Regarding the notion that, views and opinions are made on good or bad products purchased through the internet. There is no doubt that in the correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool. However, different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both approaches before making final note. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First and foremost, sharing genuine ratings and reviews online can provide better insight into the purchased product quality. Therefore, the person who has already used the services can better share his honest review of the commodity with the other prospective buyers. Consequently, this will help consumers to buy the product with greater confidence and trust. For instance, popular e-commerce website amazon recently published on their blog that 80 percent of their customers buy the goods on their portal by going through the verified reviews and rating. As a result, we can easily see and share honest opinion about any brand is a decisive factor to buy anything online. Shifting towards the second school of thought, many believe that the review system can mislead consumers. More precisely, in order to inflate their sales, companies pay marketing teams to post fake reviews about their products. For example, companies are aware of the fact that reviews have a deep impact on the consumer’s willingness to purchase / interest in purchasing the goods so they tend to misuse this system. . As a consequence, companies can freely make fool their customers. To conclude, I personally believe that, opinions and reviews are extremely essential and helping other fellow buyers to have complete and comprehensive information about the product or service. This will also deactivate fake companies and compels them to make and sell competitive products.
In the salad day of the millennium, the society is
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polarised
into two groups almost
equally
. Regarding the notion that, views and opinions
are made
on
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good
or
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bad
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products
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purchased
through the internet. There is no doubt that in the correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool.
However
,
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different
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people
have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both approaches
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before
making final note.

To commence with the
first
notion, there are myriad things to
be shared
in its
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favour
.
First
and foremost, sharing genuine ratings and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
online can provide better insight into the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
quality.
Therefore
, the person who has already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
the services can better share his honest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
of the commodity with the other prospective buyers.
Consequently
, this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
consumers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
with greater confidence and trust.
For instance
, popular e-commerce website
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amazon
recently published on their blog that 80 percent of their customers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
on their portal by going through the verified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
and rating.
As a result
, we can
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
and share honest opinion about any brand is a decisive factor to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
anything online.

Shifting towards the second school of
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thought
,
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many
believe that the
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review
system can mislead consumers. More
precisely
, in order to inflate their sales,
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companies
pay marketing teams to post fake
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reviews
about their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
For example
,
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companies
are aware of the fact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
have a deep impact on the consumer’s willingness to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
/ interest in purchasing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
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so
they tend to misuse this system.
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.
As a consequence,
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companies
can
freely
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make
fool their customers.

To conclude
, I
personally
believe that, opinions and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reviews
are
extremely
essential and helping other fellow buyers to have complete and comprehensive information about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
or service. This will
also
deactivate fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
and compels them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
and sell competitive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay 62. When you choose to eat at the restaurant or café, what are the features thatyou care about most? Explain why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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