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55) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

55) A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Everyone at least once in a lifetime are in certain situation when they have to take important decisions. While, taking these decisions, I personally believe that they should consider others opinion before taking these important decisions all by themselves. People cannot think clear in certain situations, sometimes they are inexperienced in that particular field which requires to make them decisions. I will elaborate these points further in the paragraphs below. To begin with, sometimes people are biased with the situation. They cannot see clearly the pro' s and con' s of the situation that requiring them to make decisions. So, in that case it is always helpful to seek advice from others and make a informed decision. For instance, few years ago when me and my husband where in market to bu a house, after viewing several properties we found our dream home. We were about to finalize the deal and was going to pay from our lifetime savings for that quaint and beautiful house, we decided to consult our uncle who was working in the field of real estate from several years. Even though, on first sight he liked the perfectly manicured house, his keen eyesight revealed some hidden problems in walls and electrical fittings which could have cost us an elephant. Thus, we were very fortunate to consult him before taking this important decision to buy that perfectly looking home which we would have regretted later. Furthermore, people can also get a different perspective from the experience of others, which can help them in taking informed decisions. Sometimes we cannot afford to take these important decisions without any help. For example, when we take admission in the university and need to decide our majors, we should take help of the academic counselor before making any final decision regarding the which field to choose, which subjects can fulfill our requirements or which subjects we can couple together and so on. If we do not take his advice and decide on our own we might have to face lot of trouble which can cost our grades and affect our career. All of my friends always keep contact with their academic advisors and take benefit of his experience. Finally, some people might argue that people should be capable of taking important decisions alone, which will make them responsible and competent. They will become capable facing good and bad consequences of their own decisions. I will still argue that if you can get some help from others in taking life changing decisions you should avail it. It will save lot of time and prevent discouragement in future. It will also help to keep your confidence intact. Because some decisions might not be reversible and make you vulnerable if done something wrong. To wrap up, I will conclude that although it is good to take decisions alone, but when taking important decisions people should consider others experience and perspective and make a informed decision.
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decisions
. While, taking these
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believe that they should consider others opinion
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before
taking these
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decisions
all by themselves.
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People
cannot
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think
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clear
in certain
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situations
,
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sometimes
they
are inexperienced
in that particular field which requires to
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them
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decisions
. I will elaborate these points
further
in the paragraphs below.

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sometimes
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people
are biased
with the
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situation
. They cannot
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see
clearly
the
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situation
that requiring them to
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decisions
.
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,
in that case
it is always helpful to seek advice from others and
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informed
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For instance
, few years ago when me and my husband where in market to
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a
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house
, after viewing several properties we found our dream home. We were about to finalize the deal and was going to pay from our lifetime savings for that quaint and
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beautiful
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house
, we decided to consult our uncle who was working in the field of real estate from several years.
Even though
, on
first
sight he liked the
perfectly
manicured
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house
, his keen eyesight revealed
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some
hidden problems in walls and electrical fittings which could have cost us an elephant.
Thus
, we were
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very
fortunate to consult him
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before
taking this
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important
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decision
to
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buy
that
perfectly
looking home which we would have regretted later.

Furthermore
,
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people
can
also
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get
a
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different
perspective from the experience of others, which can
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help
them in taking informed
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decisions
.
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Sometimes
we cannot afford to take these
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important
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decisions
without any
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help
.
For example
, when we take admission in the university and need to decide our majors, we should take
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help
of the academic counselor
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before
making any final
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decision
regarding the which field to choose, which subjects can fulfill our requirements or which subjects we can couple together and
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so
on. If we do not take his advice and decide on our
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we might
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have to
face
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lot of
trouble which can cost our grades and affect our career. All of my friends always
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keep
contact with their academic advisors and take benefit of his experience.

Finally
,
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some
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people
might argue that
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people
should be capable of taking
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important
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decisions
alone, which will
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make
them responsible and competent. They will become capable facing
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good
and
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consequences of their
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decisions
. I will
still
argue that if you can
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some
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help
from others in taking life changing
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decisions
you should avail it. It will save
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lot of
time and
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prevent
discouragement
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in future
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also
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help
to
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keep
your confidence intact.
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Because
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some
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decisions
might not be reversible and
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make
you vulnerable if done something
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wrong
.

To wrap up, I will conclude that although it is
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to take
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alone,
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when taking
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important
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people
should consider others experience and perspective and
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make
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a
informed
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decision
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15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay 55) A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
491 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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