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4. Do you prefer to take essay exams or multiple-choice exams? Use reasons tosupport your response. v.1

4. Do you prefer to take essay exams or multiple-choice exams? Use reasons tosupport your response. v. 1
In this age of globalisation learning a new language apart from the mother tongue is deemed a necessity. Some opine that although it is only required when someone has to move out of their country while others believe that a person should learn irrespective of that. In the following paragraphs we will discuss both the views and conclude with the most suitable notion. Knowing a foreign language is most useful when the person is in that foreign place. Being proficient in it might not be of much use when the person moves out of that place. To exemplify, I had to learn beginner level German before my internship in Germany. I was worried before temporarily moving there about my communication with native Germans but to my surprise for the six months stay there everything I knew was more than enough for me to get by. When I moved back to India, I never got any opportunity to use German ever again. Hence, the use of the foreign language might be limited to that country itself and spending effort and time on getting a good grasp on it might not be fruitful. On the other hand, learning a new language is a great brain booster. Learning a new skill, especially a new language keeps our mind active and improves out cognitive skills. For example, a recent research on students taking a foreign language as compared to students taking no foreign language has shown that the former students were scoring better than the latter ones in almost every subject. This has been proven in multiple studies that learning a tongue definitely improves the remembering, speaking and understanding skills. Therefore, learning a foreign language makes our brain sharper and nurtures our cognitive skills. In conclusion, just familiarising with a foreign language could be enough as it might not come in use after a person has moved back to his own country, but it does improve brain power irrespective of speaking it in day to day life. I personally believe that one must learn at least one foreign language as it does improve our intellect.
In this age of
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globalisation
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learning
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language
apart from the mother tongue
is deemed
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opine that although it is
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only
required when someone
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has to
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move
out of their country while others believe that a
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person
should learn irrespective of that. In the following paragraphs we will discuss both the views and conclude with the most suitable notion.

Knowing a
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foreign
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language
is most useful when the
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person
is in that
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foreign
place. Being proficient in it
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might
not be of much
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use
when the
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person
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moves
out of that place. To exemplify, I had to learn beginner level German
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before
my internship in Germany. I
was worried
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before
temporarily
moving there about my communication with native Germans
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but
to my surprise for the six months stay there everything I knew was more than
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enough
for me to
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get
by. When I
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moved
back to India, I never
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got
any opportunity to
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use
German ever again.
Hence
, the
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use
of the
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foreign
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language
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might
be limited
to that country itself and spending effort and time on getting a
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good
grasp on it
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might
not be fruitful.

On the other hand
,
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learning
a
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new
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language
is a great brain booster.
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Learning
a
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new
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skill
,
especially
a
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new
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language
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keeps
our mind active and
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improves
out cognitive
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skills
.
For example
, a recent research on students taking a
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foreign
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language
as compared to students taking no
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foreign
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language
has shown that the former students were scoring better than the latter ones in almost every subject. This has
been proven
in multiple studies that
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learning
a tongue definitely
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improves
the remembering, speaking and understanding
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skills
.
Therefore
,
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learning
a
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foreign
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language
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makes
our brain sharper and nurtures our cognitive
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skills
.

In conclusion
,
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familiarising
with a
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foreign
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language
could be
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enough
as it
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might
not
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come
in
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after a
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person
has
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moved
back to his
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own
country,
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but
it does
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improve
brain power irrespective of speaking it in day to day life. I
personally
believe that one
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must
learn at least one
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foreign
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as it does
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improve
our intellect.
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A different language is a different vision of life.
Federico Fellini

IELTS essay 4. Do you prefer to take essay exams or multiple-choice exams? Use reasons tosupport your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
351 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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