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37. Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

37. that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
Living in flats is common in urban areas. For many people, especially small families prefer to live in this system. However, there are pros and cons deciding to do this. In this essay I will discuss some of the reasons why living in multi story constructions are attractive and some of the challenges to be overcome. Further more, I give my opinion. Let's begin by looking at the advantages of flats. One of the main positives of this kind of residence is that it's affordable to the middle class. What I mean by this is that its under purchasing power of a layman. For instance, a person having moderate income can maintain his standard of living in this perspective. Due to high in demand construction of pent houses are increasing, which can be taken as an example. Secondly, It's made you more socialize. For example, you may meet many people daily because you live very close to each other. In addition, they are the first one who helps in any problem. Turning to the other side of the argument, this kind of residency breaks privacy. To be more precise, living close to each other, the neighbours know the other's family issues. This often leads hindrance in personal life. Another issue is that if any mishap or disaster happens, more people suffer. In other words, earthquake or fire breakout causes many victims. This process takes time and can be especially challenging if can not handle smartly. All things considered, multi storey living is famous among people. You need to weigh up the pros that this kind of residence is economical plus supportive in term of any crises and the cons of this are breakage of privacy as well as a great loss in any accidental situation. Personally, I believe the benefits of the plaza are that it gives shelter to the ordinary peoples and a sense of relief, eventually outweigh the benefits.
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Living
in flats is common in urban areas. For
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many
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people
,
especially
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small
families prefer to
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live
in this system.
However
, there are pros and cons deciding to do this. In this essay I will discuss
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some of the
reasons why
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living
in multi story constructions are attractive and
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some of the
challenges to
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.
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more, I give my opinion.

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Let
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begin
by looking at the advantages of flats. One of the main positives of this kind of residence is that it's affordable to the middle
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class
. What I mean by this is that its under purchasing power of a layman.
For instance
, a person having moderate income can maintain his standard of
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living
in this perspective. Due to high in demand construction of pent
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houses
are increasing, which can
be taken
as an example.
Secondly
, It's made you more socialize.
For example
, you may
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meet
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many
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people
daily
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because
you
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live
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very
close to each
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other
.
In addition
, they are the
first
one who
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helps
in any problem.

Turning to the
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other
side of the argument, this kind of residency breaks privacy. To be more precise,
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living
close to each
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other
, the
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neighbours
know the other's family issues. This
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often
leads hindrance in personal life. Another issue is that if any mishap or disaster happens, more
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people
suffer. In
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other
words, earthquake or fire breakout causes
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many
victims. This process takes time and can be
especially
challenging if can not handle
smartly
.

All things considered,
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multi storey
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living
is
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famous
among
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people
. You need to weigh up the pros that this kind of residence is economical plus supportive in term of any crises and the cons of this are breakage of privacy
as well
as a great loss in any accidental situation.
Personally
, I believe the benefits of the plaza are that it gives shelter to the ordinary
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peoples
and a sense of relief,
eventually
outweigh the benefits.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay 37. that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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