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3. Some students get their best study done at night. Others prefer to study during the day. Which time do you prefer for getting study done? v.1

3. Some students get their best study done at night. Others prefer to study during the day. Which time do you prefer for getting study done? v. 1
Many people believe in using alternative medicine to treat their illnesses. Traditional forms of drugs have been around for centuries and include the use of herbs, element, oil, and even energy transference. It is vital to assess the utility of such treatments in a modern world of medical remedy for the benefit of patients. Although, some individuals ascertain that alternative medicine is a negative, this is completely inaccurate because alternative lotion is extremely inexpensive and effective intervention for most ailments. Many forms of ancient potions are quite affordable for the general public, and can be easily accessed. In many cases, traditional remedies can be bought for just a few dollars, or even produced in a person’s garden, as where modern pharmaceuticals may cost ten times as much to cure the same illness. For instance, antibiotics like parsley and garlic, cost just a few cents. In addition, these herbs can be bought at nearby grocery stores and produce retailers without having to get prescriptions to exchange at a pharmacy. Not only is cost efficiency one benefit of using alternative medicines, but also, they are truly effective. Most importantly, traditional healing often target the root of medical problems, as opposed to just the symptoms, and have positive long lasting results. The use of many ancient therapies and natural herbs is concerned with strengthening the human body, specifically the afflicted individual’s immune system, rather than just attacking the pathogens which cause sickness. The same garlic and parsley used to treat a bacterial infection, not only helps to cleanse the body, but boosts the immune system, so that the person’s natural defence can restore health. In conclusion, the notion that traditional medicines are invaluable is completely absurd, as they are often less expensive and more effective. Therefore, alternative medicine is absolutely a worthwhile approach to healing. In the end, it is foolish to think that our ancestors did not know what they are doing.
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believe in using
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alternative
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to treat their illnesses.
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Traditional
forms of drugs have been around for centuries and include the
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use
of herbs, element, oil, and even energy transference. It is vital to assess the utility of such treatments in a modern world of medical remedy for the benefit of patients. Although,
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some
individuals ascertain that
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alternative
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medicine
is a
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negative
, this is completely inaccurate
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because
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alternative
lotion is
extremely
inexpensive and effective intervention for most ailments.

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Many
forms of ancient potions are quite affordable for the
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general public
, and can be
easily
accessed. In
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cases,
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traditional
remedies can be
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for
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a few dollars, or even produced in a person’s garden, as where modern pharmaceuticals may cost ten times as much to cure the same illness.
For instance
, antibiotics like parsley and garlic, cost
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just
a few cents.
In addition
, these herbs can be
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bought
at nearby grocery stores and produce retailers without having to
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get
prescriptions to exchange at a pharmacy. Not
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is cost
efficiency one benefit of using
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alternative
medicines,
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also
, they are
truly
effective.

Most
importantly
,
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traditional
healing
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often
target the root of medical problems, as opposed to
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just
the symptoms, and have
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positive
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long lasting
results. The
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use
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ancient therapies and natural herbs
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with strengthening the human body,
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rather
than
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attacking the pathogens which cause sickness. The same garlic and parsley
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to treat a bacterial infection, not
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helps
to cleanse the body,
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but
boosts the immune system,
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so
that the person’s natural
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defence
can restore health.

In conclusion
, the notion that
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traditional
medicines are invaluable is completely absurd, as they are
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often
less expensive and more effective.
Therefore
,
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alternative
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medicine
is
absolutely
a worthwhile approach to healing. In the
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end
, it is foolish to
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think
that our ancestors did not know what they are doing.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay 3. Some students get their best study done at night. Others prefer to study during the day. Which time do you prefer for getting study done? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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