It is obvious that immigration has been affecting all societies around the World for a long time. Naturally, there are some reasons why people prefer to move from their hometown and also results are occurring because of this circumstance.
To begin with, one of the main reasons is that people want to live in a safe country because around the World there are still some countries which have had wars or disasters so people might escape from these difficult standards of living. Moreover, the other reason is that these people would like to have better job and education opportunities so they could move from their hometown to seek better conditions. For example, ı would like to study in Europe in order to develop myself in my profession so that is why people wanting to improve themselves might go to the other country.
On the other hand, immigration leads to some negative results for immigrating people. One of the negative impacts on these people is that people's expectation may not always come true because during adaptation period people might be struggling with difficult situations due to not knowing exactly the customs, traditions and language skills in a foreign country that is why the countries have to run various refugee assistance programs and organizations to help those people.
To sum up, ı think that people immigrate in order to have and live in better life conditions. However, living after immigration may not always meet people's expectations. So, it is very important to consider all the possible outcomes.
It is obvious that immigration has been affecting all societies around the World for a long time.
Naturally
, there are
some
reasons why
people
prefer to
move
from their hometown and
also
results are occurring
because of this
circumstance.
To
begin
with, one of the main reasons is that
people
want to
live
in a safe
country
because
around the World there are
still
some
countries
which have had wars or disasters
so
people
might escape from these difficult standards of living.
Moreover
, the other reason is that these
people
would like to have better job and education opportunities
so
they could
move
from their hometown to seek better conditions.
For example
, ı would like to study in Europe in order to develop myself in my profession
so
that is
why
people
wanting to
improve
themselves might go to the other country.
On the other hand
, immigration leads to
some
negative
results for immigrating
people
. One of the
negative
impacts on these
people
is
that
people
's expectation may not always
come
true
because
during adaptation period
people
might be struggling with difficult situations due to not knowing exactly the customs, traditions and language
skills
in a foreign
country
that is
why the
countries
have to
run various refugee assistance programs and organizations to
help
those
people
.
To sum up, ı
think
that
people
immigrate in order to have and
live
in better life conditions.
However
, living after immigration may not always
meet
people
's expectations.
So
, it is
very
important
to consider all the possible outcomes.
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