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In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to besuccessful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from yourexperience to explain your answer. When you write y v.5

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to besuccessful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from yourexperience to explain your answer. When you write y v. 5
Intelligence is definitely the best characteristic that a person needs to have success in life. Firstly, it helps people to overcome hindrances. For example, when facing a hard choice to make, a person ought to be able to take the right choice to succeed afterwords, otherwise it would not be able to return to restart again. Secondly, intelligence provides support for students. For instance, when I was studying in the college, I did not need to study with my classmates after classes due to the fact that I was able to fathom the lessons properly. Therefore, I could have good grades in the tests and I did not have to redo the semester again. Thirdly, intelligence gives a person the opportunity to not only make a lot of money but also it helps a person to help others. As an example, when a person is very intelligent, he knows the sort of work to do in order to make thousands of dollars. Then, he will succeed and have a good life. In addition, being intelligent can help the person to teach others. This will make others to seem alike him. Finally, intelligence is the best quality for everybody.
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is definitely the best characteristic that a
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needs to have success in life.

Firstly
, it
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helps
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people
to overcome hindrances.
For example
, when facing a
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hard
choice to
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make
, a
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person
ought to be able to take the right choice to succeed afterwords,
otherwise
it would not be able to return to restart again.

Secondly
,
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intelligence
provides support for students.
For instance
, when I was studying in the college, I did not need to study with my classmates after classes due to the fact that I was able to fathom the lessons
properly
.
Therefore
, I could have
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good
grades in the
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tests
and I did not
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have to
redo the semester again.

Thirdly
,
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intelligence
gives a
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person
the opportunity to not
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make
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a lot of
money
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but
also
it
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helps
a
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person
to
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help
others. As an example, when a
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person
is
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very
intelligent, he knows the sort of work to do in order to
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make
thousands of dollars. Then, he will succeed and have a
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good
life.
In addition
, being intelligent can
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help
the
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person
to teach others. This will
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make
others to seem alike him.

Finally
,
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intelligence
is the best quality for everybody.
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IELTS essay In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to besuccessful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from yourexperience to explain your answer. When you write y v. 5

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198 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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