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1- A friend of yours is looking for a new place to live and has asked for your advice. What do you think is the most important characteristic of a good neighborhood? Use details and examples to explain your answer. v.2

1- A friend of yours is looking for a new place to live and has asked for your advice. What do you think is the most important characteristic of a good neighborhood? . v. 2
Nobody appreciates living in an unpleasant neighborhood. There are several characteristics that someone that will buy a new house should considerate about the neighborhood. If my friend asked me for advice of what characterize a good neighborhood he should consider, I would suggest the following: First, to research if the place has good quality public transportation. Any neighborhood that invest in the public transportation has several advantages. My friend would be able to go to the job by bus or train without the need of spend gasoline with his car. He also would live in a low traffic area, because many people might leave the car in home and take the public transportation. For instance, when I bought my house five years ago, I new that it' s neighborhood has an excellent public transportation. I could go to my job by train and economize around fifty dollars per week. The train was sharp, fast, comfortable, and no crowded. I was satisfied for choosing my house because of this, and I believe that my friend would be too. Second, to check about the neighborhood' s violence rate. This is important because safety is essential. It is terrible to leave in a place were you fell fear of go outside of your house. I had a terrible experience living in a dangerous neighborhood in my childhood. When my parents were searching for anew house, they received a great offer. The house were amazing, spacious, and cheap. They were so excited that immediately bought that. Unfortunately we were robbed in the first week living in that place, and such kind of incident happened five more time during the three years we lived in that neighborhood. My parents discovered in the worst way that they were not prudent buying a new home without check the local crime rate. I believe that when I tell this experience he if the new home is located in a safe place. Concluding, my friend surely want to live in a nice neighborhood. If he ask me for suggestion, I would suggest to him be sure if the neighborhood has not only a quality public transportation but also a low criminality rate. Following my instructions, my friend may do a great choice.
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. There are several characteristics that someone that will
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buy
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new
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house
should considerate about the
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neighborhood
. If my
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friend
asked me for advice of what characterize a
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good
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neighborhood
he should consider, I would suggest the following:

First
, to research if the place has
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good
quality
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public
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transportation
. Any
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neighborhood
that invest in the
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public
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transportation
has several advantages. My
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friend
would be able to go to the job by bus or train without the need of spend gasoline with his car. He
also
would
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live
in a low traffic area,
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because
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many
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people
might
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leave
the car in home and take the
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public
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transportation
.
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, when I
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bought
my
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house
five years ago, I
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new
that
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it&
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neighborhood
has an excellent
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public
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transportation
. I could go to my job by train and economize around fifty dollars per week. The train was sharp,
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fast
, comfortable, and
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no
crowded. I
was satisfied
for choosing my
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house
because of this
, and I believe that my
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friend
would be too.

Second, to
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about the
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important
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because
safety is essential. It is terrible to
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leave
in a place were you fell fear of go
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outside of
your
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house
. I had a terrible experience living in a
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dangerous
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neighborhood
in my childhood. When my parents were searching for anew
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house
, they received a great offer. The
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house
were amazing, spacious, and
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cheap
. They were
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so
excited that immediately
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bought
that. Unfortunately we
were robbed
in the
first
week living in that place, and such kind of incident happened five more time during the three years we
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lived
in that
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neighborhood
. My parents discovered in the worst way that they were not prudent buying a
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new
home without
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check
the local crime rate. I believe that when I
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tell
this experience he if the
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new
home
is located
in a safe place.

Concluding, my
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friend
surely
want to
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live
in a nice
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neighborhood
. If he
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ask
me for suggestion, I would suggest to him be sure if the
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neighborhood
has not
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only
a quality
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public
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transportation
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but
also
a low criminality rate. Following my instructions, my
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friend
may do a great choice.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay 1- A friend of yours is looking for a new place to live and has asked for your advice. What do you think is the most important characteristic of a good neighborhood? . v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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