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Pie Charts below show changes in annual spending by a particular UK School in 1981 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where necessary. v.2

Pie Charts below show changes in annual spending by a particular UK School in 1981 1991 and 2001.
The three Pie Charts illustrate, the information regarding annual expenditure by particular school in UK in 3 years 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, majority of the proportion of budget was constituted by teachers, and other workers salaries about 60%, while insurance made least contribution. To begin with, budget spending on teachers salaries, resources for example, books and on insurance increased from 1981 to 1991 with figures of 40% 15% and 2% in 1981, and 50% 20% and 3% in 1991. On the other hand, total expenditure on other workers salaries and furniture and equipment fell 6 and 10% during 1981 to 1991. However, in 2001 out of total school spending teachers salaries made about 45% which was 5% less than 1991. Whereas, other workers salaries comprised 15% about 7% less than 1991. Resources also went down 11% as compared to 1991. Furthermore both insurance, and furniture and equipment gained 5 and 18% respectively.
The three Pie Charts illustrate, the information regarding annual expenditure by particular school in UK in 3 years 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Overall
,
majority of
the proportion of budget
was constituted
by teachers, and
other
workers
salaries
about 60%, while insurance made
least
contribution.

To
begin
with, budget spending on teachers
salaries
, resources
for example
, books and on insurance increased from 1981 to 1991 with figures of 40% 15% and 2% in 1981, and 50% 20% and 3% in 1991. On the
other
hand, total expenditure on
other
workers
salaries
and furniture and equipment fell 6 and 10% during 1981 to 1991.

However
, in 2001 out of total school spending teachers
salaries
made about 45% which was 5% less than 1991.
Whereas
,
other
workers
salaries
comprised 15% about 7% less than 1991. Resources
also
went down 11% as compared to 1991.
Furthermore
both insurance, and furniture and equipment gained 5 and 18%
respectively
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic Pie Charts below show changes in annual spending by a particular UK School in 1981 1991 and 2001.

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4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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