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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart below shows the results of a survey of the causes of poor learning outcomes in schools in a particular country in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, a v.49

The pie chart below shows the results of a survey of the causes of poor learning outcomes in schools in a particular country in 2011.
The pie chart illustrates the reasons why unskillful learning came from schools in a country in 2011. The units are measured from the percentage. Overall, it is clear that the untrained teachers had a significant impact on academic results, while the smallest proportion of unsatisfactory school results was the lack of revision. When it comes to unskilled teachers, this factor was a contribution to 35%, which accounted for nearly one-third. The percentage of unskilled instructors and nurturing was 25 and 27 percent respectively. This was followed by the way a child is brought up, a cause quoted by 27% of the poll sample which is the second largest contribution. On the other hand, 20 percent of people regarded as one of the low educational attainments was could income families. This ratio was double compared with poor infrastructures, experienced by 10 percent. However, it is undoubtedly true that only 8 percent people blamed lack of revision for below academic results.
The pie chart illustrates the reasons why unskillful learning came from schools in a country in 2011. The units
are measured
from the percentage.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the untrained teachers had a significant impact on academic results, while the smallest proportion of unsatisfactory school results was the lack of revision.

When it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to unskilled teachers, this factor was a contribution to 35%, which accounted for
nearly
one-third. The percentage of unskilled instructors and nurturing was 25 and 27
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percent
respectively
. This
was followed
by the way a child
is brought
up, a cause quoted by 27% of the poll sample which is the second largest contribution.
On the other hand
, 20
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
regarded as one of the low educational attainments was could income families. This ratio was double compared with poor infrastructures, experienced by 10
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percent
.
However
, it is
undoubtedly
true that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
8
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
blamed lack of revision for below academic results.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the results of a survey of the causes of poor learning outcomes in schools in a particular country in 2011.

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3 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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