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The pie charts and table give information about the total value sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. v.2

The pie charts and table give information about the total value sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. v. 2
The given table illustrates the value of fish that was imported to the Unite States in the billions of dollars scale, while the three pie charts show that the percentage of three different types which are export countries to sell fish from 1988 to 2000. Overall, it is immediately clear that the value of import increasingly rose almost double in the research period. At the initial research, Canada was predominant regarding exporting fish whereas other countries overtook the amount of fish, by the final year. When it comes to the table, it can be seen that there was a $1. 95 billion growth between 1988 and 1992. Finally, it reached over $10 billion in the last year. Looking at the pie charts, the ratio of fish imported to the US accounted for over half in Canada, this percent was higher than the others types combined. However, the other countries occupied 42 percent, became the main source compare with China and Canada which provide 30 and 28 percent respectively.
The
given
table illustrates the value of fish that
was imported
to the Unite States in the billions of dollars scale, while the three pie charts
show
that the percentage of three
different
types which are export countries to sell fish from 1988 to 2000.

Overall
, it is immediately
clear
that the value of import
increasingly
rose almost double in the research period. At the initial research, Canada was predominant regarding exporting fish whereas other countries overtook the amount of fish, by the final year.

When it
comes
to the table, it can be
seen
that there was a $1. 95 billion growth between 1988 and 1992.
Finally
, it reached over $10 billion in the last year.

Looking at the pie charts, the ratio of fish imported to the US accounted for over half in Canada, this percent was higher than the others types combined.
However
, the other countries occupied 42 percent, became the main source compare with China and Canada which provide 30 and 28 percent
respectively
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts and table give information about the total value sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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