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You play sports eg football for a local team you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital Write a letter to your team mate In your letter you say how you feel about the news Ask about the treatment in the hospital Suggest some ways of ch v.2

You play sports eg football for a local team you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital Write a letter to your team mate In your letter you say how you feel about the news Ask about the treatment in the hospital Suggest some ways of ch v. 2
Dear Rajat Last night, one of our team mate told me about your severe injury while you are doing practice for our next match. As I was absent yesterday, so I do not know anything about that. But I feel really sorry for you. You are not only my good friend but also you are a good player of our team. I felt really agony when I heard about you because you motivate me in each situation. My friend told me that you are admitted in the " Sanjivani" hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. I would like to suggest you that their is doctor" Anshuman" and he tailor made in this kind of problem, so if you consult with him that will be beneficial for. I know you can not play our next match but do not feel bad because I have a good news for you. Our school authority announced a scholarship for you for your dedication towards study and games. You will get your letter very soon. l also come next Saturday and stay with you for whole day and we will enjoyed a lot. I am looking forward to hearing from you. With best regards Urvashi
Dear
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Rajat


Last night, one of our
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
team mate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me about your severe injury while you are doing practice for our
next
match. As I was absent yesterday,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I do not know anything about that.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I feel
really
sorry for you.

You are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
friend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
you are a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
player of our team. I felt
really
agony when I heard about you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
you motivate me in each situation.

My friend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that you
are admitted
in the
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&quot
;
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Sanjivani&quot
; hospital.
That is
the best hospital in our city and you will
be recovered
in few days by their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
faculty and facilities. I would like to suggest you that
Did you mean "there"?
their
is
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doctor&quot
;
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Anshuman&quot
; and he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "tailors", "tailored".
tailor
made in this kind of problem,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
if you consult with him that will be beneficial for.

I know you can not play our
next
match
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but
do not feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
news for you. Our school authority announced a scholarship for you for your dedication towards study and games. You will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your letter
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
l
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
next
Saturday and stay with you for whole
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
day and
we will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "enjoy"
enjoyed
a lot.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

With best regards

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Urvashi
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS academic You play sports eg football for a local team you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital Write a letter to your team mate In your letter you say how you feel about the news Ask about the treatment in the hospital Suggest some ways of ch v. 2

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
216 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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