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You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter: Describe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you want the neighbour to take. v.2

You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter: Describe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you want the neighbour to take. v. 2
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to complain about the late night noises coming from your home. I live in house number 271 which is next to yours. I have been facing this problem for about one month. Sometimes the volume of your television is too high, while at other times the noise of late night parties is creating trouble for me. I am a student and a part-time worker. Actually, I have to study late into the night because my exams are coming up next month. I wouldn’t have bothered to write if I didn’t have exams coming up. I am in no way trying to interfere in your personal affairs, but I would really appreciate it if you could reduce the volume of your TV at night and it would be great if you could also postpone any parties you are planning to organize this month or next month. I hope you will understand my situation. Thank you for your consideration Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to complain about the late
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
night
noises coming from your home. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
number 271 which is
next
to yours.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been facing this problem for about one month.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
the volume of your television is too high, while at other times the noise of late
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
night
parties is creating trouble for me. I am a student and a part-time worker. Actually, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
study late into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
night
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
my exams are coming up
next
month. I wouldn’t have bothered to write if I didn’t have exams coming up.

I am in no way trying to interfere in your personal affairs,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would
really
appreciate it if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the volume of your TV at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
night
and it would be great if you could
also
postpone any parties you are planning to organize this month or
next
month.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will understand my situation.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS academic You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter: Describe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you want the neighbour to take. v. 2

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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