The diagram highlights the process by which aluminium cans are recycled.
It is noticeable that there are six stages involving in the recycling process, beginning with collecting aluminium cans and finishing with reusing recycled ones with many purposes.
Looking at the detail, the first step is that aluminium cans are collected by putting into some available bins in somewhere, which are only for aluminium one thus no need to be separated with other types of rubbish. The following step is that all collected aluminium cans undergo a process including being cleaned to get rid of a dirty surface, being sorted, being shredded into smaller bits and being continually compressed in many containers, which bring processed aluminium cans to a furnace. At the point, they are heated at a high temperature for a particular period of time.
Following this, while the aluminium bits are still too hot, they are transferred immediately to a rolled machine to make pieces of aluminium in the thickness of 2. 5 mm to 6 mm. Having been recycled as new cans using for many types of beverage in factories, the products are widely reused in many shops and supermarkets. The interesting point is that 74% number of aluminium cans are recycled in the UK, making it significantly less wasted and protective the environment.
The diagram highlights the process by which
aluminium
cans
are recycled
.
It is noticeable that there are six stages involving in the recycling process, beginning with collecting
aluminium
cans
and finishing with reusing recycled ones with
many
purposes.
Looking at the detail, the
first
step is that
aluminium
cans
are collected
by putting into
some
available bins in somewhere, which are
only
for
aluminium
one
thus
no need to
be separated
with other types of rubbish. The following step is that
all collected
aluminium
cans
undergo a process including
being cleaned
to
get
rid of a dirty surface,
being sorted
,
being shredded
into smaller bits and being
continually
compressed in
many
containers, which bring processed
aluminium
cans
to a furnace. At the point, they
are heated
at a high temperature for a particular period of time.
Following this, while the
aluminium
bits are
still
too hot, they
are transferred
immediately to a rolled machine to
make
pieces of
aluminium
in the thickness of 2. 5 mm to 6 mm. Having
been recycled
as new
cans
using for
many
types of beverage in factories, the products are
widely
reused in
many
shops and supermarkets. The interesting point is that 74% number of
aluminium
cans
are recycled
in the UK, making it
significantly
less wasted and protective the environment.
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