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The picture below show the differences in the layout of conference centre between its present and its future plan Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The picture below show the differences in the layout of conference centre between its present and its future plan
The given maps illustrates the layout of a conference centre and its proposed to changes for future. Overall, the number of meeting room will be increased in future building. There will changed the size of the car park, the garden, the hall and the meeting rooms. Presently, people can enter the reception through a door. There is a cafe next to the reception in east and the toilet are on the other side. The two meeting rooms is planed on west wall of building. However, the hall is on the opposite wall with approximately same dimension as addition of meeting rooms. The garden and the car park amenities also available following to the main center in east direction. According to future plan, the cafe will be replaced by fitness centre and cafe will be shifted at north side of hall, included with the separate kitchen. The two meeting rooms will be converted in to three. The garden will become double compare to present size, and the size of present car park will be reduced. The car parking will direct connect with main road; as the parking road will be included into the car parking space.
The
given
maps illustrates the layout of a conference
centre
and
its
proposed to
changes
for future.

Overall
, the number of
meeting
room
will
be increased
in future building. There will
changed
the size of the
car
park, the garden, the hall and the
meeting
rooms.

Presently
,
people
can enter the reception through a door. There is a
cafe
next
to the reception in east and the toilet are on the other side. The two
meeting
rooms
is planed
on west wall of building.
However
, the hall is on the opposite wall with approximately same dimension as addition of
meeting
rooms
. The garden and the
car
park amenities
also
available following to the main center in east direction.

According to future plan, the
cafe
will
be replaced
by fitness
centre
and
cafe
will
be shifted
at north side of hall, included with the separate kitchen. The two
meeting
rooms
will
be converted
in to three. The garden will become double compare to present size, and the size of present
car
park will be
reduced
.
The
car
parking will direct connect with main road; as the parking road will
be included
into the
car
parking space.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS academic The picture below show the differences in the layout of conference centre between its present and its future plan

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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