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The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. v.4

The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. v. 4
The column chart demonstrates the proportion of female employees who worked in three job sectors between 1990 and 2015. It can be clearly observed that during 2005, 2010, and 2015, the female employees in the call center of Greece were higher as compared to other years. Coming to the Banking and finance section, only the year 2015 had the highest number of female employees, accounting for 35 %, while in the rest of the years, the females were below 20%. Turning to the customer service sector, in the starting years 1990, 1995, and 2000, women were noticed around 13%, and thereafter, they escalated to 20% in the year 2005. Eventually, in 2010 and 2015, the women employees exhibited a rapid escalation in the percentage, which accounted for 28% and 50% respectively. Overall, having taken an overview of the above-mentioned information, it is crystal clear that the maximum employed females were found in the last three years than the first three years.
The column chart demonstrates the proportion of
female
employees
who worked in three job sectors between 1990 and 2015.

It can be
clearly
observed that during 2005, 2010, and 2015, the
female
employees
in the call center of Greece were higher
as
compared to other years. Coming to the Banking and finance section,
only
the
year
2015 had the highest number of
female
employees
, accounting for 35 %, while in the rest of the years, the
females
were below 20%.

Turning to the customer service sector, in the starting years 1990, 1995, and 2000, women
were noticed
around 13%, and thereafter, they escalated to 20% in the
year
2005.
Eventually
, in 2010 and 2015, the women
employees
exhibited a rapid escalation in the percentage, which accounted for 28% and 50%
respectively
.

Overall
, having taken an overview of the above-mentioned information, it is crystal
clear
that the maximum employed
females
were found
in the last three years than the
first
three years.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. v. 4

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