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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant v.1

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia
The table provides information regarding the amount of money that australian citizens in five specific countries including adelaide, perth, brisbane, sydney and melbourne have to pay for the use of water. Generally, perth is where the average bill of water charged on each household is relatively higher than other cities whereas in melbourne, that is the cheapest amongst the five cities. Particularly, residents in perth have to pay an average bill up to 332 dollars while in adelaide, brisbane and sydney, each household only pay from 310 to 319 dollar for the average bill. To be more specificed, the cost of water is divided into two categories, one is for those uses up to 125 kiloliters and the other is for the use of over 125 kiloliters. In case of living in sydney or melbourne, people will pay the same price for the use of water at 0. 98 and 0. 78 dollar respectively not to mentioned the amount of water was used. australians in brisbane pay 0. 81 dollar for the use of water that less than 125 kiloliters and 0. 84 dollar if the amount of used water is more than that. However, different rates are used in adelaide and perth. 0. 42 dollars will be paid if the used water was under 125 kiloliter but the cost of water charged on those who used over 125 kiloliters is 1. 0 dollar and 1. 5 respectively.
The table provides information regarding the amount of money that
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australian
citizens in five specific countries including
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adelaide
,
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perth
,
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brisbane
,
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sydney
and
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melbourne
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have to
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pay
for the
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use
of water.

Generally
,
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perth is
where the average bill of
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water
charged on each household is
relatively
higher than other cities whereas in
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melbourne
,
that is
the cheapest amongst the five cities.

Particularly
, residents in
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perth
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pay
an average bill up to 332
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dollars
while in
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adelaide
,
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brisbane
and
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sydney
, each household
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only
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pay
from 310 to 319
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dollar
for the average bill.

To be more
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specificed
, the cost of
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water
is divided
into two categories, one is for those
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uses
up to 125 kiloliters and the other is for the
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use
of over 125 kiloliters. In case of living in
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sydney
or
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melbourne
,
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people
will
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pay
the same price for the
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use
of
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water
at 0. 98 and 0. 78
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dollar
respectively
not
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to mentioned
the amount of
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water
was
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used
.
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australians
in
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brisbane
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pay
0. 81
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dollar
for the
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use
of
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water
that less than 125 kiloliters and 0. 84
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if the amount of
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used
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water
is more than that.
However
,
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different
rates are
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used
in
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adelaide
and
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perth
. 0. 42
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dollars
will
be paid
if the
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used
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water
was under 125
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kiloliter
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but
the cost of
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water
charged on those who
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used
over 125 kiloliters is 1. 0
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dollar
and 1. 5
respectively
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Mistakes

IELTS academic The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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