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The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years. v.2

The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years. v. 2
The table shows the amount of waste produced by six countries in three different years. It is obvious that waste produced by the USA was far greater than that of other countries and Scotland contributed to the least amount of wastages in the given years. According to the table data, Ireland produced 16 million tonnes leftover in 1992 which was 6 million tonnes higher than that of 8 years ago. Poland’s production of garbage decreased considerably in 1992 than its initial 10 million tonnes in 1988. Japan and Canada generated 22 and 19 million tonnes garbage respectively in 1992 compared to their 15 and 20 million tonnes in 1988. Scotland’s production of waste was the lowest in the given years and stood at 2 million tonnes in 1992. The USA alone produced 150 million tonnes garbage which was overwhelmingly higher than that of other countries. Waste production in this country upsurged to 209 million tonnes after eight years when Canada and Japan’s figures stood at 29 and 25 respectively. Waste production in 2000 indicates that the USA alone produced more leftovers than the cumulative production of rest of the countries.
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the amount of
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waste
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produced
by six
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countries
in three
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different
years. It is obvious that
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waste
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produced
by the USA was far greater than that of other
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countries
and Scotland contributed to the least amount of
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wastages
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given
years.

According to the table data, Ireland
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produced
16
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million
tonnes leftover in 1992 which was 6
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million
tonnes higher than that of 8 years ago. Poland’s
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production
of garbage decreased
considerably
in 1992 than its initial 10
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million
tonnes in 1988. Japan and Canada generated 22 and 19
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million
tonnes garbage
respectively
in 1992 compared to their 15 and 20
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million
tonnes in 1988. Scotland’s
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production
of
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waste
was the lowest in the
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given
years and stood at 2
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million
tonnes in 1992. The USA alone
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produced
150
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million
tonnes garbage which was
overwhelmingly
higher than that of other
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countries
.
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Waste
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production
in this
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country
upsurged to 209
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million
tonnes after eight years when Canada and Japan’s figures stood at 29 and 25
respectively
.
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Waste
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production
in 2000 indicates that the USA alone
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produced
more leftovers than the cumulative
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production
of rest of the
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countries
.
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IELTS academic The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years. v. 2

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190 words
6.0
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