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The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years. v. 1

The table compares the waste production in six different countries in three different years. Overall, the US alone produced more waste in these years than the rest of the countries did in combination. According to the table data, Canada produced 20 million tonnes of litter which was exactly double than that of Ireland and Poland. The waste production in Japan was 15 million tonnes. Scotland produced the least amount of garbage which was only 3 million tonnes. These five countries together were responsible for producing 58 million tonnes of wastage which was almost half of the waste products in the USA. Next year the waste generation in the US increased to 150 million tonnes, almost a fifty percent increase, while Poland, Canada and Scotland managed to reduce it. The most significant improvement was in Poland in terms of waste production - from 10 to below 3 million tonnes in 4 years. Finally, in 2000, waste production in Ireland, Poland, Japan, Canada and Scotland was 9. 9, 18, 25, 29 and 5 million tonnes respectively and it is obvious that all these countries have been successful to check their waste production. However, the USA in this year generated more than 200 million tonnes of leftovers while the rest of countries together produced less than 87 million tonnes of waste.

IELTS academic The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years. v.1

The table compares the waste production in six
different
countries in three
different
years.
Overall
, the US alone produced more waste in these years than the rest of the countries did in combination. According to the table data, Canada produced 20 million tonnes of litter which was exactly double than that of Ireland and Poland. The waste production in Japan was 15 million tonnes. Scotland produced the least amount of garbage which was
only
3 million tonnes. These five countries together were responsible for producing 58 million tonnes of wastage which was almost half of the waste products in the USA.
Next
year the waste generation in the US increased to 150 million tonnes, almost a fifty percent increase, while Poland, Canada and Scotland managed to
reduce
it. The most significant improvement was in Poland in terms of waste production
-
from 10 to below 3 million tonnes in 4 years.
Finally
, in 2000, waste production in Ireland, Poland, Japan, Canada and Scotland was 9. 9, 18, 25, 29 and 5 million tonnes
respectively
and it is obvious that all these countries have been successful to
check
their waste production.
However
, the USA in this year generated more than 200 million tonnes of leftovers while the rest of countries together produced less than 87 million tonnes of waste.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
56Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
2 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resources: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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