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The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city Units are measured in percentage v.2

The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city Units are measured in percentage v. 2
The two tables gives information, of two surveys outcome on six sides of own city life between 1980 and 2010. Overall, it can be seen that the education, health care and environment percentage was high in both the years whereas, transport was the least. In 1980, most of the people were happy with health care, education and environment which were on the top of people satisfaction, where health care have captured 82% people satisfaction and education and environment was have having the same figure 72%. Shops and employment was rated almost the same 64% and 62% respectively but 22-24% have said it is neither good nor bad. Transport was the least voted for it goodness which was 52 % and 32% people favored that is bad. Coming to 2010, where an accelerated incline was occurred in education where more than 80% people were happy with it. Health care have observed a decline of 8% as compared to 2010. After thirty years employment rose to 72% from 62%. The transport facilities have dramatically fall down where it was like by only 39%, the figure was almost the same as people who were not satisfied.
The two tables gives information, of two surveys outcome on six sides of
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city life between 1980 and 2010.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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education
,
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health
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care
and environment percentage was high in both the years whereas, transport was the least.

In 1980, most of the
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people
were happy with
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health
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care
,
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education
and environment which were on the top of
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people
satisfaction, where
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health
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care
have captured 82%
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people
satisfaction and
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education
and environment was
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have having
the same figure 72%. Shops and employment
was rated
almost the same 64% and 62%
respectively
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but
22-24% have said it is neither
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good
nor
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bad
. Transport was the least voted for it goodness which was 52 % and 32%
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people
favored
that is
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bad
.

Coming to 2010, where an accelerated incline
was occurred
in
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education
where more than 80%
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people
were happy with it.
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Health
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care
have observed a decline of 8% as compared to 2010.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
thirty years employment rose to 72% from 62%. The transport facilities have
dramatically
fall down where it was like by
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only
39%, the figure was almost the same as
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people
who were not satisfied.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city Units are measured in percentage v. 2

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4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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