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Scientists and engineers are continuing to look for new ways to generate electricity. The following is a diagram of how electricity may be generated from tidal flow. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariso v.2

Scientists and engineers are continuing to look for new ways to generate electricity. The following is a diagram of how electricity may be generated from tidal flow.
The diagram illustrates the new process of electric generation. It is clear that there are four main stages in the process of producing electricity. Firstly, electricity is generated from rising and falling tides. At the initial stage of the process, electricity is generated from tidal flow. The process continues with electricity being gone through main construction and roadway. After that, electricity is carried to sluice gates to control flow and to be ready for the next stages. The process continues with a step called “water flow” where water from incoming tide passes generator. At the final stage, electricity is put into electricity generator, and then electricity finally produced.
The diagram illustrates the new
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process
of electric generation.

It is
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clear
that there are four main stages in the
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process
of producing
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electricity
.
Firstly
,
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electricity
is generated
from rising and falling tides.

At the initial stage of the
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process
,
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electricity
is generated
from tidal flow. The
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process
continues with
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electricity
being gone
through main construction and roadway. After that,
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electricity
is carried
to sluice gates to control flow and to be ready for the
next
stages.

The
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process
continues with a step called “water flow” where water from incoming tide passes generator. At the final stage,
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electricity
is put
into
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electricity
generator, and then
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electricity
finally
produced.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic Scientists and engineers are continuing to look for new ways to generate electricity. The following is a diagram of how electricity may be generated from tidal flow.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
108 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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