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The given table illustates data about the level of satisfaction of a urban sport club that is evaluated in three criterias: range of activities, club facilities and opening hours. v.1

The given table illustates data about the level of satisfaction of a urban sport club that is evaluated in three criterias: range of activities, club facilities and opening hours. v. 1
The given table illustates data about the level of satisfaction of a urban sport club that is evaluated in three criterias: range of activities, club facilities and opening hours. Overall, majority of boy and girl members say that they feel very satisfied in above issues. the proportion of very satisfied of female members is overwhelming in club facilities and opening hours compare to male one. As is observed from graph that regarding range of activities, over a half of boy members says that they gain high satisfaction compare to only 35% of girl members. Meanwhile, only 5% of male members shows their opinion that they are not satisfied of range of activities, this figure for girl makes up approximately a third. In terms of club facilities, there are significant percentages in high safisfaction of this criteria, at nearly 65% for each. 27% of male members says that they feel satisfied and only 10% is not satisfied while the percentage of not satisfied of female accounts for 14%. It is noticeable that female members who show very satisfied is 72% and only 3% is not favorable. By contrast, 37% of female members is not satisfied of opening hours while the figure for very satisfied occupies 44% in total.
The
given
table
illustates
data about the level of satisfaction of
a
urban sport
club
that
is evaluated
in three
criterias
: range of activities,
club
facilities and opening hours.
Overall
,
majority of
boy and girl
members
say that they feel
very
satisfied
in above issues.
the
proportion of
very
satisfied
of
female
members
is overwhelming in
club
facilities and opening hours compare to male one.

As
is observed
from graph that regarding range of activities, over a half of boy
members
says that they gain high satisfaction compare to
only
35% of girl
members
. Meanwhile,
only
5% of male
members
shows
their opinion that they are not
satisfied
of range of activities, this figure for girl
makes
up approximately a third. In terms of
club
facilities, there are significant percentages in high
safisfaction
of
this
criteria, at
nearly
65% for each. 27% of male
members
says that they feel
satisfied
and
only
10% is not
satisfied
while the percentage of not
satisfied
of
female
accounts for 14%. It is noticeable that
female
members
who
show
very
satisfied
is 72% and
only
3% is not favorable. By contrast, 37% of
female
members
is not
satisfied
of opening hours while the figure for
very
satisfied
occupies 44% in total.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic The given table illustates data about the level of satisfaction of a urban sport club that is evaluated in three criterias: range of activities, club facilities and opening hours. v. 1

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2 paragraphs
207 words
5.5
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