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The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012.
The provided table chart illustrates about a survey on various television programs which was seen by people of different age categories in European nation in 2012. It can clearly be seen that according to survey of 2012, 29% individuals of 11-15 age group mostly liked to watch cartoons and 22% sports. There were 1% difference between feature films (18%) and soap opera (17%). Tv dramas were watched by 8% and 6% selected to watch news. Moreover, in the age group from 21 to 25 almost all television programmes were famous among the masses, except cartoons ( only by 4%). Moving further towards remaining information, the popularity of feature films were more rather than tv dramas in age group of 16 to 30, 23% and 10% respectively. The same percentage of multitudes could be noticed who were saw cartoons and sports with 18%. News channels were being seen by 19% and it was most common as compare as soap opera which was prefered by only 12%. Overall, it is clear that news programme became more popular with the advancement of age, while the popularity of cartoons related shows decreased.
The provided table chart illustrates about a survey on various television programs which was
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age
categories in European nation in 2012.

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clearly
be
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seen
that according to survey of 2012, 29% individuals of 11-15
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age
group
mostly
liked to
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watch
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cartoons
and 22% sports. There were 1% difference between feature films (18%) and soap opera (17%).
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dramas were
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watched
by 8% and 6% selected to
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watch
news.
Moreover
, in the
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age
group from 21 to 25 almost all television
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programmes
were
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famous
among the masses, except
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cartoons
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(
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by 4%).

Moving
further
towards remaining information, the popularity of feature films were more
rather
than
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tv
dramas in
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age
group of 16 to 30, 23% and 10%
respectively
. The same percentage of multitudes could
be noticed
who were
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saw
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cartoons
and sports with 18%. News channels were being
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seen
by 19% and it was most common as compare as soap opera which was
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prefered
by
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only
12%.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that news
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programme
became more popular with the advancement of
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age
, while the popularity of
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cartoons
related
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shows
decreased.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012.

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4 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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