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The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020
The given line graph illustrates the number of vehicles in England and Wales from 2000 to the present and also give predictions up to 2020. The bar chart depicts the information about carbon dioxide emission in tonnes by four different transport methods, which are cars, buses, vans and trucks over the same period. Overall, the trend for cars purchasing is continue growing till today and also expect more expansion by 2020. CO2 emission are aspected to escalate in future. To begin, there were nearly 20 million vehicles in England and Wales in 2000. Then, total number were a steady increase to 35 million in following 10 years and is expected to experienced a rapid upward tendency reaching around 60 million by 2020. The column graph shows four principle sources of CO2 emission. Carbon dioxide emission by cars was the highest amount among four vehicles. To start with almost 2. 25 tonnes in 2000, this amount was rose marginally to just over 2. 5 tonnes and will ended with 3 million in 2020. Interestingly, trucks went through and follow a similar trend but amount is significantly less, from around 0. 7 tonnes to nearly 1. 3 tonnes. Rate for buses and vans is likely to keep steady at around 0. 4 tonnes and 0. 6 tonnes respectively.
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given
line graph illustrates the number of vehicles in England and Wales from 2000 to the present and
also
give predictions up to 2020. The bar chart depicts the information about carbon dioxide
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emission
in tonnes by four
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different
transport methods, which are cars, buses, vans and trucks over the same period.

Overall
, the trend for cars purchasing is
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continue
growing till
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today
and
also
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expect
more expansion by 2020. CO2
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emission
are
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aspected
to escalate
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in future
.

To
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begin
, there were
nearly
20
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million
vehicles in England and Wales in 2000. Then, total number were a steady increase to 35
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million
in following 10 years and is
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expected
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to experienced
a rapid upward tendency reaching around 60
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million
by 2020.

The column graph
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shows
four
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principle
sources of CO2
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emission
. Carbon dioxide
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emission
by cars was the highest amount among four vehicles. To
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start
with almost 2. 25 tonnes in 2000, this amount was rose
marginally
to
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just
over 2. 5 tonnes and will ended with 3
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million
in 2020.
Interestingly
, trucks went through and follow a similar trend
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but
amount is
significantly
less, from around 0. 7 tonnes to
nearly
1. 3 tonnes. Rate for buses and vans is likely to
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keep
steady at around 0. 4 tonnes and 0. 6 tonnes
respectively
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IELTS academic The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020

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4 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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