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The table below shows the number of medals won by the top countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. v.2

The table below shows the number of medals won by the top countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. v. 2
The tabular chart highlights the information about the quality of medals attainted in London Olympic Games, during the year 2012 and participated top ten nations. Overall, it is clearly seen that the highes medalswon by United State, and the lowest medals achieved by Hungary in the given time period. To begin with, United States was at the first position because that country achieved maximum medals, whereas China and Russia were won equal number of medals (82). Inaddition, Great Britain had been obtained 29 gold medals, and 19 Bronze medals in the London Olympic Games. Moreover, Germany and France were attainted similar number of gold medals (88), and South Korea was won 8 silver medals in 2012. Apart from all that, Italy and Hungary were obtained 28 and 17 total medals in the Olympic Games. Furthermore, Australia had been won gold medals (7), silvers (16) and Bronze (12) in 2012 respectively.
The tabular chart highlights the information about the quality of
medals
attainted
in London Olympic Games, during the year 2012 and participated top ten nations.

Overall
, it is
clearly
seen
that the
highes
medalswon
by United State, and the lowest
medals
achieved by Hungary in the
given
time period.

To
begin
with, United States was at the
first
position
because
that country achieved maximum
medals
, whereas China and Russia
were won
equal number of
medals
(82).
Inaddition
, Great Britain had
been obtained
29 gold
medals
, and 19 Bronze
medals
in the London Olympic Games.
Moreover
, Germany and France were
attainted
similar number of gold
medals
(88), and South Korea
was won
8 silver
medals
in 2012.

Apart from all that, Italy and Hungary
were obtained
28 and 17 total
medals
in the Olympic Games.
Furthermore
, Australia had
been won
gold
medals
(7), silvers (16) and Bronze (12) in 2012
respectively
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows the number of medals won by the top countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. v. 2

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4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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