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The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant v.2

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009
The chart showed information about how many numbers of hybrid vehicles has been sold since 2006 until 2009 in different countries across the world. Looking in more derail, it can be clearly seen that the greatest proportion of selling belonged to the United States in which vehicles were bought 250000 in 2006. Then, there was a peak in numbers at 350000 in 2007. On the other hand, during the next 2-year period, the number of sales declined smoothly from 350000 to nearly 280000. According to data, Japan and other countries had same values in selling this transport products which were accounted for 50000 at first. After that, there was a gradual rise in numbers between 2006 and 2008, reaching 75000 and 100000 on average, respectively. Also, in 2009, sales rocketed to 350000 in japan but ones in the rest of world stayed approximately fix in 2009, compared with previous year. Overall, what stands out from the bar chart revealed that Japan had considerable upward trends in vehicles sales and overtook the US in last year.
The chart
showed
information about how
many
numbers
of hybrid vehicles has
been sold
since 2006 until 2009 in
different
countries across the world.

Looking in more derail, it can be
clearly
seen
that the greatest proportion of selling belonged to the United States in which vehicles were
bought
250000 in 2006. Then, there was a peak in
numbers
at 350000 in 2007.
On the other hand
, during the
next
2-year period, the
number
of sales declined
smoothly
from 350000 to
nearly
280000.

According to data, Japan and other countries had same values in selling this transport products which
were accounted
for 50000 at
first
. After that, there was a gradual rise in
numbers
between 2006 and 2008, reaching 75000 and 100000 on average,
respectively
.
Also
, in 2009, sales rocketed to 350000 in japan
but
ones in the rest of world stayed approximately
fix
in 2009, compared with previous year.

Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart revealed that Japan had considerable upward trends in vehicles sales and overtook the US in last year.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009

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4 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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