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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words v.1

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre
The map illustrates three options for building a leisure center. Overall, in the map provided three sites which are A, B, and C for leisure center construction. Also, delta of river and transportation link is located in the map however, the site is not crowded or even populated. according to the information locations A and B both have transportation link with road and located in the bank of river. While in the territory of location A is plant, which consists of five round buildings and two high tubes. Moreover, it produces a large amount of exhaust fumes. In the location B is located three houses without any infrastructure. there are fields nearby location B. according to the data location C is on the left side of the map. location C is the furthest one from the riverside and road links, however there a lot of green forest. The territory C located in the highland in comparison with sites A and B.
The
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illustrates three options for building a leisure center.

Overall
, in the
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provided three sites which are A, B, and C for leisure center construction.
Also
, delta of river and transportation link is
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located
in the
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however
, the site is not crowded or even populated.

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according
to the information
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locations
A and B both have transportation link with road and
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located
in the bank of river. While in the territory of
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location
A is plant, which consists of five round buildings and two high tubes.
Moreover
, it produces a large amount of exhaust fumes. In the
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location
B is
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located
three
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houses
without any infrastructure.
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there
are fields nearby
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location
B.

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according
to the data
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location
C is on the
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left
side of the
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map
.
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location
C is the furthest one from the riverside and road links,
however
there
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a lot of
green forest. The territory C
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located
in the highland
in comparison
with sites A and B.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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