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The table below shows the leisure hours by Canadians in a year based on their age groups. v.1

The table below shows the leisure hours by Canadians in a year based on their age groups. v. 1
The table reveals data on the duration of yearly leisure activities by Canadians based on their age groups. As is obvious from the illustration, watching TV is the most popular free time activity among Canadians while young people take parts in sports and exercise more than older people do. In details, a Canadian teenager spends 1200 hours watching TV programmes in a year which is 100 hours more than that of people over 70 years old and three times than that of people in their thirties. Hours spend watching TV by teens and older people are higher than that of other age groups. Individual exercise is more popular among Canadians between 30 and 50 years as they spend 200 hours in a year, while group exercise and sports are more preferred by younger people. People over 60 do not take part in sports and groups exercise. Socialising with more people is commonly seen among younger people while adults like to have fewer people to socialise. Cinema seems like the least preferred activity as roughly 75 hours on an average is spend on this activity by all age groups.
The table reveals data on the duration of yearly leisure
activities
by Canadians based on their age
groups
. As is obvious from the illustration, watching TV is the most popular free time
activity
among Canadians while young
people
take parts in sports and
exercise
more than older
people
do.

In
details
, a Canadian
teenager
spends
1200
hours
watching TV
programmes
in a
year
which is 100
hours
more than that of
people
over 70 years
old
and three times than that of
people
in their thirties.
Hours
spend
watching TV by teens and older
people
are higher than that of other age
groups
. Individual
exercise
is more popular among Canadians between 30 and 50 years as they
spend
200
hours
in a
year
, while
group
exercise
and sports are more preferred by younger
people
.
People
over 60 do not
take part
in sports and
groups
exercise
.
Socialising
with more
people
is
commonly
seen
among younger
people
while adults like to have fewer
people
to
socialise
. Cinema seems like the least preferred
activity
as roughly 75
hours
on an average is
spend
on this
activity
by all age
groups
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below shows the leisure hours by Canadians in a year based on their age groups. v. 1

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
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