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The chart below shows the changes in sales of four different types of books from 2002 to 2012. v.1

The chart below shows the changes in sales of four different types of books from 2002 to 2012. v. 1
The bar graph compares the sales of four book genres between 2002 to 2012. Overall, history books vend increased remarkably while the admiration for hobby related books declined over the period. As is presented in the illustration, history books had the highest demand in the market as it made more than 4000 trades in 2002. In this year the sale of hobby related books was the lowest, less than 1000, while entertainment and art books each recorded around 2000 sales volume. After 4 years, history books trade doubled while art and entertainment categories each made approximately 3000 sales. Hobby books’ demand slightly increased in 2002 but dropped in 2004. In all the following years, the sales of hobby books remained constant and had always been the lowest around 200 sales. On the contrary, history books’ sale reached to over 10, 000 in 2008, the peak for the sale of any genre of books, and finally stood at around 9. 5 thousand in 2012. Moreover, demand for entertainment and art books were almost the same in 2006 and 2008, just over 3000, but on the subsequent years, art books sales outranked the entertainment books sales.
The bar graph compares the
sales
of four
book
genres
between 2002 to 2012
.
Overall
,
history
books
vend increased
remarkably
while the admiration for
hobby
related
books
declined over the period.

As
is presented
in the illustration,
history
books
had the highest demand in the market as it made more than 4000 trades in 2002. In this
year
the
sale
of
hobby
related
books
was the lowest, less than 1000, while entertainment and
art
books
each recorded around 2000
sales
volume. After 4 years,
history
books
trade doubled while
art
and entertainment categories each made approximately 3000
sales
.
Hobby
books’
demand
slightly
increased in 2002
but
dropped in 2004. In all the following years, the
sales
of
hobby
books
remained constant and had always been the lowest around 200
sales
.
On the contrary
,
history
books’
sale
reached to over 10, 000 in 2008, the peak for the
sale
of any genre of
books
, and
finally
stood at around 9. 5 thousand in 2012.
Moreover
, demand for entertainment and
art
books
were almost the same in 2006 and 2008,
just
over 3000,
but
on the subsequent years,
art
books
sales
outranked the entertainment
books
sales
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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