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The chart below shows the changes in sales of four different types of books from 2002 to 2012. v.2

The chart below shows the changes in sales of four different types of books from 2002 to 2012. v. 2
The bar graph compares the deviations in sales of four different book genres for a decade, from 2002 to 2012. Overall, the sales of three given categories - history, entertainment and art books showed a rising trend except for hobby related books while the demand for history books was the highest. In particular, history books were the biggest sellers with a sale volume of around 4500 copies in 2002. This publication made the highest selling record in 2008 with ten thousand sales and then in subsequent years witnessed a slight drop. In 2012, over 9000 history books were sold. The sales of art and entertainment books in 2002 were around 2 thousand copies, approximately half of the history book sales and showed an overall progress in the following years. Approximately 3000 copies of each of these two genres were sold in 2008 which was relatively higher than the previous year's sales. Finally, in 2012 the demand for art books increased to 4000 while the former one was sale volume stood at nearly 3000. On the contrary, hobbies book category recorded the least sale, remained between 500 to 700 in the given period.
The bar graph compares the deviations in
sales
of four
different
book
genres for a decade, from 2002 to 2012.

Overall
, the
sales
of three
given
categories
-
history
, entertainment and art
books
showed
a rising trend
except for
hobby related
books
while the demand for
history
books
was the highest.

In particular
,
history
books
were the biggest sellers with a
sale
volume of around 4500 copies in 2002. This publication made the highest selling record in 2008 with ten thousand
sales
and then in subsequent years witnessed a slight drop. In 2012, over 9000
history
books
were sold
.

The
sales
of art and entertainment
books
in 2002 were around 2 thousand copies, approximately half of the
history
book
sales
and
showed
an
overall
progress in the following years. Approximately 3000 copies of each of these two genres
were sold
in 2008 which was
relatively
higher than the previous year's
sales
.
Finally
, in 2012 the demand for art
books
increased to 4000 while the former one was
sale
volume stood at
nearly
3000.
On the contrary
, hobbies
book
category recorded the least
sale
, remained
between 500 to 700
in the
given
period.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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