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The table shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc. ) owned in britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v.2

The table shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc. ) owned in britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v. 2
The given table detect the information related to consumer durables in Britain for given interval of time. At the glance, it observed that vacuum cleaner, refrigerator as well as washing machine preference is gradually increased and difference between on above is not more. On other hand, television is a preference of almost 100% household consumer. The central heating preference increased by double of its preference percentage in given interval of time. On other hand, dishwasher are rejected by about 95% consumer. But the preference of consumer related to telephone is increased by 35% in given interval of time. In the nutshell, television is the first choice of consumer with almost 100% of preference. On other hand, 95% of consumer reject the presence of dishwasher.
The
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given
table detect the information related to
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consumer
durables in Britain for
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given
interval of time.

At the glance, it observed that vacuum cleaner, refrigerator
as well
as washing machine
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preference
is
gradually
increased and difference between on above is not more. On other hand, television is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preference
of almost 100% household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumer
. The central heating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preference
increased by double of its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preference
percentage in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
interval of time. On other hand, dishwasher
are rejected
by about 95%
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumer
.
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But
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preference
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumer
related to telephone
is increased
by 35% in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
interval of time.

In the nutshell, television is the
first
choice of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumer
with almost 100% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preference
. On other hand, 95% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumer
reject the presence of dishwasher.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc. ) owned in britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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