The diagram below show that the environmental issues raised by the product over its life cycle. v.2
The diagram below show that the environmental issues raised by the product over its life cycle. v. 2
The diagram gives informations about the total effect on the environment during the product lifecycle. Use of the product not only reason of the environment issue but also the manufacturing of product to till end of life span also cause the environment problem.
Firstly, new product is under design and development process. It take more electricity. Then it goes for manufactur. It also require row material and energy sources. It harmfull to environment. Adding to, the production with the help of forklift and plenty of machinery which runs by the fueland directly affect on the air pollution.
During the packing the material, plastic paper more usefull and also harm to the landfield. After the finished material supply to the retailer next to the shops. The customer deal with material help of the features such as design, prise and product quality and quantity. In the last, after use of product should be disposal or it recycling further process used. Product feedback is neccessary because of it fullfill the customer needs.
Overall, Throught the whole process, material of the product directly or indirectly effect on the environment. Throughout it cause water, air and land pollutions.
The diagram gives
informations
about the total effect on the
environment
during the
product
lifecycle.
Use
of the
product
not
only
reason of the
environment
issue
but
also
the manufacturing of
product
to till
end
of life span
also
cause the
environment
problem.
Firstly
, new
product
is under design and development process. It
take
more electricity. Then it goes for
manufactur
. It
also
require
row
material
and energy sources. It
harmfull
to
environment
. Adding to, the production with the
help
of forklift and
plenty
of machinery which runs by the
fueland
directly
affect
on the air pollution.
During the packing the
material
, plastic paper more
usefull
and
also
harm to the
landfield
.
After
the finished
material
supply to the retailer
next
to the shops. The customer deal with
material
help
of the features such as design,
prise
and
product
quality and quantity. In the last, after
use
of
product
should be disposal or it recycling
further
process
used
.
Product
feedback is
neccessary
because
of it
fullfill
the customer needs.
Overall
,
Throught
the whole process,
material
of the
product
directly
or
indirectly
effect on the
environment
. Throughout it cause water, air and land pollutions.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes