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The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities v.2

The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities v. 2
The table presents data about the average amount of time per day that men and women in the UK spend on different daily activities. Overall, it is evident that people in the UK spend the most time on sleeping. Beside that, men in the UK have more leisure, worked and studied time than women. It can be seen from the table that UK males and females sleep for over 8 hours per day. There is not significant difference about average hours and minutes that men and women in the UK do some daily activities such as resting, eating and drinking, voluntary work and meetings. On the other hand, men spend 5 hours and 25 minutes on doing some leisure activities, while the figure for women is 4 hours and 53 minutes. Worked and studied time of men are more than women. By contrast, women spend more time than men to do housework and take care of children.
The table presents data about the average amount of
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in the UK
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on sleeping. Beside that,
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in the UK have more leisure, worked and studied
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than women.

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from the table that UK males and females sleep for over 8
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per day. There is not significant difference about average
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and minutes that
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men
and
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women
in the UK do
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some
daily activities such as resting, eating and drinking, voluntary work and meetings.

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,
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men
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5
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and 25 minutes on doing
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leisure activities, while the figure for
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is 4
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and 53 minutes. Worked and studied
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of
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are more than
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. By contrast,
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more
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than
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to do housework and take care of children.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities v. 2

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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