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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.5

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
The given line graph clearly illustrates the variation in quantity of passengers in an underground metro station between 6 am to 10 pm. The underground station experienced an massive increase in the number of passengers from 100 to 400 between 6 and 7 o’clock, before hitting a free fall to nearly 200 at 10 o’clock. Then there was gradual growth in the passengers till 2 am, followed by a sharp decrease to 100 at 4 o’clock. Now after 4 o’clock to 8 o’clock, the same kind of pattern can be observed for the graph. The figures shoot up to nearly 400 and then came back to approximately 100, then witnessed a slight fluctuation. To sum up, it is quite apparent that London underground station, saw a significant fluctuation in the number of passenger over the given interval. The highest number of passenger observe at 8 am and 4 pm around 400.
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passengers
in an underground metro station between 6 am to 10 pm.

The underground station experienced
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an
massive increase in the number of
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passengers
from 100 to 400 between 6 and 7
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o’clock
,
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before
hitting a free fall to
nearly
200 at 10
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. Then there was gradual growth in the
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passengers
till 2 am, followed by a sharp decrease to 100 at 4
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o’clock
.
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Now
after 4
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o’clock
to 8
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o’clock
, the same kind of pattern can
be observed
for the graph. The figures shoot up to
nearly
400 and then came back to approximately 100, then witnessed a slight fluctuation.

To sum up, it is quite apparent that London underground station,
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saw
a significant fluctuation in the number of
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passenger
over the
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given
interval. The highest number of
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passenger
observe at 8 am and 4 pm around 400.
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IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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