The two pictures show the area and decoration changing of the first floor in a particular library in the year 1995 and now. It seems this library become easier to find particular area and is cut off some parts with time goes by.
In 1995, when visitors entered the library by entrance in map’s bottom, they first saw three areas, study tables and chair, a small book display platform and an area which provide newspapers for people to read. They located in the central. However in nowadays the central area is occupied by the book display. Then in the left hand, visitors could find local reference books in 1995, and now it changes into area which hold new books. In 1995 the library has place where behind the local reference books area for people to use computers. But it had no internet access. But now the place is full of chairs and the computer area has occupied the place where provided reference books and maps in 1995. Also now the library can serve internet access toward its visitors. The librarian’s desk replaced by self-service desk and the only area that has no change is the photocopiers which visitors can see in the right hand of the entrance.
The two pictures
show
the
area
and decoration changing of the
first
floor in a particular library in the year 1995 and
now
. It seems this library become easier to find particular
area
and is
cut
off
some
parts with time goes by.
In 1995, when
visitors
entered the library by entrance in map’s bottom, they
first
saw
three
areas
, study tables and chair, a
small
book
display platform and an
area
which provide newspapers for
people
to read. They located in the central.
However
in nowadays
the central
area
is occupied
by the
book
display. Then in the
left
hand,
visitors
could find local reference
books
in 1995, and
now
it
changes
into
area
which hold new
books
. In 1995 the library has place where behind the local reference
books
area
for
people
to
use
computers.
But
it had no internet access.
But
now
the place is full of chairs and the computer
area
has occupied the place where provided reference
books
and maps in 1995.
Also
now
the library can serve internet access toward its
visitors
. The librarian’s desk replaced by self-service desk and the
only
area
that has no
change
is the photocopiers which
visitors
can
see
in the right hand of the entrance.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes