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The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words v.2

The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout.
The diagrams illustrate how the internal layout of the ground floor of a museum should be changed. At a glance, it is possible to see that the main entrance will be on a different street and some rooms will no longer be present. The museum is adjacent to three streets: Spring, Patterson and Josephine street. Currently, the entrance in on Spring Street, but in the future, it will be on Patterson street. This change involves mainly the marine life room, and the called walkway together with the position of the lifts. The marine life is planned to be moved from the corner close to Josephine Street to the position where there is the main entrance now. Two new rooms will be built on the Josephine street side: the modern art room and the storeroom. Another main change is that the two lifts will be smaller and adjacent to the atrium because in such an area the new main entrance will take place. Another minor change is that the gemstone room which will be enlarged.
The diagrams illustrate how the internal layout of the
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ground floor
of a museum should be
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changed
. At a glance, it is possible to
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see
that the
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main
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entrance
will be on a
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different
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street
and
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some
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rooms
will no longer be present.

The museum is adjacent to three
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streets
: Spring, Patterson and Josephine
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street
.
Currently
, the
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entrance
in on Spring
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Street
,
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but
in the future, it will be on Patterson
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street
. This
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change
involves
mainly
the marine life
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room
, and the called walkway together with the position of the lifts.

The marine life
is planned
to be
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moved
from the corner close to Josephine
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Street
to the position where there is the
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main
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entrance
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now
. Two new
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rooms
will
be built
on the Josephine
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street
side: the modern art
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room
and the storeroom. Another
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main
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change
is that the two lifts will be smaller and adjacent to the atrium
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because
in such an area the new
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main
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entrance
will take place. Another minor
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change
is that the gemstone
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room
which will
be enlarged
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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