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The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout.

The diagrams illustrate how the internal layout of the ground floor of a museum should be changed. At a glance, it is possible to see that the main entrance will be on a different street and some rooms will no longer be present. The museum is adjacent to three streets: Spring, Patterson and Josephine street. Currently, the entrance in on Spring Street, but in the future, it will be on Patterson street. This change involves mainly the marine life room, and the called walkway together with the position of the lifts. The marine life is planned to be moved from the corner close to Josephine Street to the position where there is the main entrance now. Two new rooms will be built on the Josephine street side: the modern art room and the storeroom. Another main change is that the two lifts will be smaller and adjacent to the atrium because in such an area the new main entrance will take place. Another minor change is that the gemstone room which will be enlarged.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words v.2

The diagrams illustrate how the internal layout of the
ground floor
of a museum should be
changed
. At a glance, it is possible to
see
that the
main
entrance
will be on a
different
street
and
some
rooms
will no longer be present.

The museum is adjacent to three
streets
: Spring, Patterson and Josephine
street
.
Currently
, the
entrance
in on Spring
Street
,
but
in the future, it will be on Patterson
street
. This
change
involves
mainly
the marine life
room
, and the called walkway together with the position of the lifts.

The marine life
is planned
to be
moved
from the corner close to Josephine
Street
to the position where there is the
main
entrance
now
. Two new
rooms
will
be built
on the Josephine
street
side: the modern art
room
and the storeroom. Another
main
change
is that the two lifts will be smaller and adjacent to the atrium
because
in such an area the new
main
entrance
will take place. Another minor
change
is that the gemstone
room
which will
be enlarged
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resources: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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