The following blueprint illustrates the Grange park when it initially inaugurated in 1920 and same park after refurbishment. The park have entrance in both sides one in Eldon street and other in Arnold Avenue.
As an overall trend since 1920 park had more open spaces and garden but, stage in one side for musician. But currently park have underground parking and amphitheater for concerts. apart from that have children play ground and cafe.
In century ago when park was first opened for public mostly meant for outdoor activities and exercises. In parks seating and rose garden were present all around the park but currently seats arrange around central rose garden in place of fountain. Another replacement made in musician stage to amphitheater for conterts.
However, on other side cafe and children play constructed by destruction of pond for water plants in one corner. While other corner glass house removed and water feature build. The most striking difference is underground car parking which was absent in 1920 model.
nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for company or organisation. Why this is the case? What could be disadvantages for it.
The following blueprint illustrates the Grange
park
when it
initially
inaugurated in 1920 and same
park
after refurbishment. The
park
have entrance in both sides one in Eldon street and other in Arnold Avenue.
As an
overall
trend since 1920
park
had more open spaces and garden
but
, stage in one side for musician.
But
currently
park
have underground parking and amphitheater for concerts.
apart
from that have children play ground and
cafe
.
In century ago when
park
was
first
opened for public
mostly
meant for outdoor activities and exercises. In
parks
seating and rose garden were present all around the
park
but
currently
seats arrange around central rose garden in place of fountain. Another replacement made in musician stage to amphitheater for
conterts
.
However
, on other side
cafe
and children play constructed by destruction of pond for water plants in one corner. While other corner glass
house
removed and water feature build. The most striking difference is underground car parking which was absent in 1920 model.
nowadays
many
people
choose to be self-employed,
rather
than work for
company
or
organisation
. Why this is the case? What could be disadvantages for it.
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