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Check Your Text it's freeThe maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
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Overall, the varied range of differences can be seen and the only thing that stayed the same is the location of two entrances which are still at the middle north and south side of the park.
According to the map, we can observe that the fountain which was located at the centre of the park was replaced by a new rose garden and all of the seats which formerly were located all over the park, now are placed around the rose garden. Also, now the park has a café which is situated instead of one of the rose gardens near the north entrance. Besides, now near the café, there is an area specifically for children’s play which in 1920 was a pond. Close to the south entrance we can see a water feature in place of a glasshouse and on the other side of the park there is an amphitheater which has been replaced with a former stage.
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Overall Band Score: 7.5
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7
Most key features are identified, but the overview provides limited detail.
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7.5
A good range of vocabulary is used, but there is potential for further sophistication in word choice.
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7
The response logically organizes information but lacks clear paragraph division for different themes.
Grammatical Range
7.5
The text uses a range of sentence structures but could incorporate more complex sentences.
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