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The pie charts show the highest education level of women in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995. v.1

The pie charts show the highest education level of women in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995. v. 1
The pie charts compare the female education scenarios in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995. As is obvious, the level of female education in Sri Lanka remarkably progressed within three decades. Getting back to the details, more than one-third of Sri Lankan females never attended schools in 1965 while only 3% completed their graduation. No woman in this year was awarded a post graduate degree while almost half of Sri Lankan women barely completed their primary education. In this year, 18% female received their 12th-grade diploma and the overall education level in Sri Lankan women was dismal. However, after three decades, this scenario changed exceptionally when one in every five Sri Lankan women hold a post-graduate qualification and no woman was unschooled. Exactly one-quarter of them completed 12th grades while graduate women comprised 35%. It is worth noticing that no women in this period were uneducated and that was a remarkable progress in terms of women education in Sri Lanka. Finally, 20% female in this year completed their primary education which was exactly the same ratio of post graduate women in this year.
The pie charts compare the
female
education
scenarios in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995. As is obvious, the level of
female
education
in Sri Lanka
remarkably
progressed within three decades.

Getting back to the
details
, more than one-third of Sri Lankan
females
never attended schools in 1965 while
only
3%
completed
their graduation. No woman in this
year
was awarded
a post graduate degree while almost half of Sri Lankan
women
barely
completed
their primary
education
. In this
year
, 18%
female
received their 12th-grade diploma and the
overall
education
level in Sri Lankan
women
was dismal.

However
, after three decades, this scenario
changed
exceptionally
when one in every five Sri Lankan
women
hold a post-graduate qualification and no woman
was unschooled
. Exactly one-quarter of them
completed
12th grades while graduate
women
comprised 35%. It is worth noticing that no
women
in this period
were uneducated
and that was
a remarkable progress
in terms of
women
education
in Sri Lanka.
Finally
, 20%
female
in this
year
completed
their primary
education
which was exactly the same ratio of post graduate
women
in this
year
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts show the highest education level of women in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995. v. 1

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