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The pie charts give information about the farming products in two various areas of the country. The percentage of 4 products varied in 2 regions. v.2

The pie charts give information about the farming products in two various areas of the country. The percentage of 4 products varied in 2 regions. v. 2
In eastern region, farmer produce nearly similar percentage of 4 products. meat accounted for 35% of the production. dairy placed second with 30% and vegetables rank third with 20%. The lowest proportion belonged to grain with 15% of total production. There was a big difference between the agricultural production in Western region. In contrast with eastern one, grain made up the largest percentage with 45% in the West. There was also 35% of meat produced in this area while dairy ratio was only 15%. The proportion of vegetables was the lowest of only 5%. In general, meat and grain were 2 main agricultural products in both area whilst vegetables and dairy production were almost the same or lower.
In eastern region, farmer produce
nearly
similar percentage of 4 products.
meat
accounted for 35% of the production.
dairy
placed second with 30% and vegetables rank third with 20%. The lowest proportion belonged to grain with 15% of total production.

There was a
big
difference between the agricultural production in Western region.
In contrast
with eastern one, grain made up the largest percentage with 45% in the West. There was
also
35% of meat produced in this area while dairy ratio was
only
15%. The proportion of vegetables was the lowest of
only
5%.

In general
, meat and grain were 2 main agricultural products in both area whilst vegetables and dairy production were almost the same or lower.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts give information about the farming products in two various areas of the country. The percentage of 4 products varied in 2 regions. v. 2

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