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the bar chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education v.2

the bar chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education v. 2
The bar chart gives information about how many girls were registered in different stages of school education over a total of 100 boys, separated by developed and developing countries in 1998 and 1990. Overall, Tertiary education showed the highest number of girls as much in 1990 as in 1998 in developed countries. On the other hand, tertiary educations in developing countries had the lowest amount. Every level of school education illustrates a difference between developed and developing countries, where developed countries had more significant numbers of girls than developing countries in both years. According to the bar chart, Tertiary education in developed countries had over 100 girls over a population of 100 boys in 1990 and 1998. Moreover, This level showed the biggest difference between developed (over 100) and developing countries (under 80) in both years. Primary education showed a small difference between developed and developing countries in the same period analyzed, with a difference under 20 people. Secondary educations illustrated a slight difference between 1990 and 1998 in developed countries (just over 100) while developing countries had a variation of over 10 in the same period analyzed.
The bar chart gives information about how
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IELTS academic the bar chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education v. 2

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