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The pie chart shows the main reasons what agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three region of the world during the 1990s. v.2

The pie chart shows the main reasons what agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three region of the world during the 1990s. v. 2
The given statistical illustration represented in the form of pie chart depicted about some reason behind the damaging worldwide land and tubular form of information shows affectation over three countries in 1990. In the pie chart illustrate about the large part of land was damaging by use for over grazing, it covers 35% and 28% of deforestation and over cultivation respectively, other 7% of land was damaged by the other purposes. In the table form, it shows that land reduction in three countries. Reduce forest area more in Europe than other two, Europe was 9. 8 percent and other Oceania and North America were given 1. 7 and 0. 2 percent respectively. Excess grazing shows in the Oceania over the 11% and then Europe got 5. 5% and followed by 1. 5% in North America. More cultivation did not see in the Oceania, Europe has 7. 7% and North America has 3. 3% in all. In total Europe land degradation is higher than other two, it was 23% and then Oceania and North America has 13% and 5% respectively. Overall, grazing and deforestation are more affected of all land degradation in Europe.
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reason behind the damaging worldwide
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and tubular form of information
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affectation
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three countries in 1990.

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was damaging by
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grazing, it covers 35% and 28% of deforestation and
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,
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7% of
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was damaged
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purposes.

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reduction in three countries.
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forest area more in Europe than
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two, Europe was 9. 8 percent and
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Oceania and
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America were
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1. 7 and 0. 2 percent
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. Excess grazing
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in the Oceania
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the 11% and then Europe
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5. 5% and followed by 1. 5% in
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America. More cultivation did not
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in the Oceania, Europe has 7. 7% and
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America has 3. 3% in all. In total Europe
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degradation is higher than
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two, it was 23% and then Oceania and
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America has 13% and 5%
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.

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degradation in Europe.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the main reasons what agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three region of the world during the 1990s. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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