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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words v.2

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region
The graph reveals the rate of worldwide population and the spreading of fortune in six different regions of the world. Overall, the percentage of wealth in the developed countries are higher significantly. On contrary, the developing countries have the bigger rate of inhabitants. To begin with, North America only have around 5% of people who lives, but the distribution of asset considerably reaches a peak at almost 35% as the highest of all areas. Similarly, the citizens in Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific stand at 15% and 5%, but they have 30% and approximately 25% of the global riches. On the other hand, the global prosperity in China, Other Asia-Pacific, India, Africa, and Latin America and Caribbean are dramatically lower than the rest of sectors. China has been founded as the most populous country which has 30% of the world’s population with owned about 2% of the world’s wealth. Furthermore, India was the lowest rate of universal fortune which hold at less than 1% although, the residents rose to around 15%.
The graph reveals the rate of worldwide population and the spreading of fortune in six
different
regions of the world.
Overall
, the percentage of wealth in the
developed countries
are higher
significantly
. On contrary, the
developing countries
have the bigger rate of inhabitants.

To
begin
with, North America
only
have around 5% of
people
who
lives
,
but
the distribution of asset
considerably
reaches a peak at almost 35% as the highest of all areas.
Similarly
, the citizens in Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific stand at 15% and 5%,
but
they have 30% and approximately 25% of the global riches.

On the other hand
, the global prosperity in China, Other Asia-Pacific, India, Africa, and Latin America and Caribbean are
dramatically
lower than the rest of sectors. China has
been founded
as the most populous country which has 30% of the world’s population with
owned
about 2% of the world’s wealth.
Furthermore
, India was the lowest rate of universal fortune which hold at less than 1% although, the residents rose to around 15%.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
170 words
7.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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