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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.
The given diagram illustrate the process of recycling of wasted glass bottles. It is clear that, there are three distinct stages from collection of garbage bottles to the sailing of new bottles. In the beginning, unused glass bottles to be gathered in the collection point and altogether would be transport to the second stage of process area by truck. On the next step, such glasses placed under the high pressure water for cleaning purpose. After that which would be categorized by clear, green, and brown. Then these items would be send to glass factory where there are broken in pieces. Such glass pieces pass through the burning furnace with the pressure of 600- 800 degree Celsius. At the end of second stage recycled liquid glass and new liquid glass are send for glass mould area to make shape appropriate for glass bottles. In the final stage new moulded bottle products are ready for sale so that it would be transported to supermarket.
The
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given
diagram illustrate the process of recycling of wasted
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glass
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bottles
. It is
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clear
that, there are three distinct
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stages
from collection of garbage
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bottles
to the sailing of new bottles.

In the beginning, unused
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glass
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bottles
to
be gathered
in the collection point and altogether would be transport to the second
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stage
of process area by truck. On the
next
step, such glasses placed under the high pressure water for cleaning purpose. After that which would
be categorized
by
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clear
, green, and brown. Then these items would be
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send
to
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glass
factory where there
are broken
in pieces. Such
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glass
pieces pass through the burning furnace with the pressure of
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600- 800
degree Celsius. At the
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end
of second
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stage
recycled liquid
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glass
and new liquid
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glass
are
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send
for
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glass
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mould
area to
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make
shape appropriate for
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glass
bottles.

In the final
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stage
new
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moulded
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bottle
products are ready for sale
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so
that it would
be transported
to supermarket.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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