The line graph compares the number of visitors in Malaysia and Dubai between 1995 and 2003. Both these countries received more tourists in 2003 than they did in 1995 and Dubai’s share of travellers went higher than that of Malaysia despite a reverse scenario in early years.
According to the illustration, the number of tourists who visited Malaysia in 1995 was 0. 1 million, more than double than that of Dubai. The visitors in Malaysia kept on increasing very swiftly till 2000 when it attracted more than a quarter tourists. On the contrary, Dubai, despite a decline in 1996, managed to attract more vacationers and had almost the same number of people visiting there in 2000 as it was in Malaysia. Next year, both of their tourists’ number went up but afterwards Dubai had been more successful in getting more visitors than Malaysia did. In 2003, four hundred thousand people travelled to Dubai, an overwhelming rise than that of 1995, while Malaysia managed to attract fewer than 250 thousand vacationers, which was roughly 2. 5 times than that of 1995.
The line graph compares the
number
of visitors in Malaysia and Dubai between 1995 and 2003. Both these countries received more
tourists
in 2003 than they did in 1995 and Dubai’s share of
travellers
went higher than that of Malaysia despite a reverse scenario in early years.
According to the illustration, the
number
of
tourists
who visited Malaysia in 1995 was 0. 1 million, more than double than that of Dubai. The visitors in Malaysia
kept
on increasing
very
swiftly
till 2000 when it attracted more than a quarter
tourists
.
On the contrary
, Dubai, despite a decline in 1996, managed to attract more vacationers and had almost the same
number
of
people
visiting there in 2000 as it was in Malaysia.
Next
year, both of their
tourists’
number
went up
but
afterwards Dubai had been more successful in getting more visitors than Malaysia did. In 2003, four hundred thousand
people
travelled to Dubai, an overwhelming rise than that of 1995, while Malaysia managed to attract fewer than 250 thousand vacationers, which was roughly 2. 5
times
than that of 1995.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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