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The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. v.2

The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. v. 2
The illustration outlines the percentages of female employees in the call centre, finance, and customer service jobs in Greece between 1990 and 2015. Overall, women participation in these sectors remarkably improved and almost half of the customer service and call centre jobs were held by female employees in 2015 compared to a meagre 2 to 10 per cent in 1990. As is observed, call centres in Greece in 1990 had only 2 to 3 per cent of female workers whereas around 8 per cent of employees in the banking and finance industries were women. The highest ratio of female executives was employed in customer service this year but it was still just over 10% of total employees. Up until the year 2000, the ratio of female workers in call centre jobs slowly increased but their ratio in two other sectors remained almost the same. However, in 2005, call centres hired nearly one-quarter female employees while more than 20% of customer service executives in this year were female. After a decade, women employment in Greece in these sectors notably advanced and more than half of the customer care jobs were filled by females while call centres hired around 45 per cent female employees. Finally, the banking and finance sector employed around 35% females, which was more than four times higher than that of 1990.
The illustration outlines the percentages of
female
employees
in the
call
centre
, finance, and
customer
service
jobs
in Greece between 1990 and 2015.

Overall
, women participation in these
sectors
remarkably
improved
and almost half of the
customer
service
and
call
centre
jobs
were held
by
female
employees
in 2015 compared to a
meagre
2 to 10 per cent in 1990.

As
is observed
,
call
centres
in Greece in 1990 had
only
2 to 3 per cent of
female
workers whereas around 8 per cent of
employees
in the banking and finance industries were women. The highest ratio of
female
executives
was employed
in
customer
service
this year
but
it was
still
just
over 10% of total
employees
. Up until the year 2000, the ratio of
female
workers in
call
centre
jobs
slowly
increased
but
their ratio in two other
sectors
remained almost the same.
However
, in 2005,
call
centres
hired
nearly
one-quarter
female
employees
while more than 20% of
customer
service
executives in this year were
female
. After a decade, women employment in Greece in these
sectors
notably
advanced and more than half of the
customer
care
jobs
were filled
by
females
while
call
centres
hired around 45 per cent
female
employees
.
Finally
, the banking and finance
sector
employed around 35%
females
, which was more than four times higher than that of 1990.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015. v. 2

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